my winter holiday英語作文1

　　Winter holiday is coming,so I have a winter holiday plan now.I am going to spend lots of time of my holiday on sports this year.Playing basketball is always my favourite,so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together.Sometimes we will have a match against some other teams.I will enjoy the sense when we win the game.Of course,I will spend lots of time on doing my homework.

　　It’s important for me to do my lessons well.If I still have enough time,I am going to visit Beijing City,and visiting Beijing is my dream from childhood to now.Oh,what a great winter holiday!

my winter holiday英語作文2

　　My winter holiday was very interesting.

　　As that day i got back to my native hometown,cousins and cousines took me to ski.My skiing skill isnt good,got down for 15 times,they laughed at me behind,i cant help smiling, too.The day of Spring Festival was the most happiness day,we had meal for the first,a table of delicious food,that made me so glad.

　　Then we played the fireworks.The childrens waving the lightening ticket while watching the *s playing the fireworks.That was so beautiful！Like the stars rainning down the world.At the end,it was time to get the red bag.we were very exciting,and satisfied.

　　Sometimes,we also went shopping and bought something we like. Winter holiday life was really wonderful！

　　我的.寒假生活非常有趣。剛回老家那天，哥哥姐姐弟弟妹妹就拉著我去溜冰場溜冰。我技術(shù)不好，摔了15個跟頭，他們都在那邊笑我，我也情不自禁的笑了。大年三十那天最開心。先是吃團圓飯，一桌子的美食，讓我大飽口服。然后就是放煙花。我們幾個小孩一邊拿著熒光棒甩，一邊看大人們放煙花。好美�。∠窠德湓谌碎g的星星。最后就是拿紅包拉，我們都很興奮，也很滿足。有時，我們還會去逛街，買一些自己喜歡的東西。 寒假生活真美好！

my winter holiday英語作文3

　　Just three days after the spring festival，I had to worry about my train ticket from my home Fuzhou to Beijing. Because the train Z60’s tickets could be bought 21 days in advance.

　　I made an appointment with a classmate to meet at the train station in order to queue for tickets. We got up early and queue in the first as we expected. We waited for three hours and thought innocently that we were sure to get two tickets. But it proved to be a tragedy.

　　At that time，I struggled myself to tolerate my anger. It was the first time that I had realized there were so many people in China. We had no choice but got out of the station silently and full of disappointment. When could the problem of buying the train tickets difficultly during the spring festival be solved？ I didn’t want to experience the despair again. Thanks to the classmate’s father，it was he that bought a ticket for me and brought me back from endless despair. I didn’t know how he succeeds in getting the tickets.

　　Just as many criticize said，“China will never be a developed country before the problem of population is settled.” No matter how much achievement China achieved，it will be little when distribute to 1.3 billion people. But no matter how small problem a single person have，it will become enormous when multi* 1.3 billion people. Even so，I am full of hope about the problem for I know that our country has made great efforts.

　　How I wish it would be easier to buy a train ticket next year.

my winter holiday英語作文4

　　From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday. I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!I’m unlucky on the playing too. I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire. I ‘m careless to kindle the firecracker, so I’m very unlucky.

　　I still unlucky on my friend’s party. In the morning, I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10:50. After ten minutes, the party would start! So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home! And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home. My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me!

　　I’m worried and feel unlucky on my weigh. Last term, I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram! I must to do banting!But most important, I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium, I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse, the monkey……in the sea. Now I’ve done it . It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.

　　從1月16日到二月七日是我們的寒假。我想在冬季假期每個人都做了很多的事情。但是我沒有。讓你聽聽我的寒假的故事吧。我花了很多時間做作業(yè).

　　在我的寒假里的每一天,我總是很晚起床。然后我聽錄音,已是9點鐘。然后我吃早餐,然后我做我的家庭作業(yè)!雖然我不是非常緩慢，但作業(yè)太多了!我在玩的時候也不幸。我玩爆竹時傷了我的手指。我粗心的點爆竹,所以我很不走運。我仍然不幸的是，在我的朋友的聚會。早上,我想早起,但我醒來晚了。十分鐘后,該聚會將要開始!所以我只吃一塊面包,我去我朋友的家!當(dāng)我回家時，已在他家呆了很長一段時間了。我的母親和父親非常生氣，他們無緣無故地大罵我!我很擔(dān)心和感到體重也不好。上學(xué)期,我48公斤,但現(xiàn)在我是51公斤!我必須減肥!但最重要的是,我去了上海海洋水族館,我非常想去那里,因為我希望看到馬,猴子……在大海�，F(xiàn)在我做到了。這是在我的寒假里最好的一件事。

my winter holiday英語作文5

　　My winter holidays plans me studying for my English , I will make great efforts to learn English. Persist in listening to half hours of English every day.

　　I will acplish the school assignment that the teacher arranges best with the quickest speed. I can not forget to take the body exercise certainly also , I may take the body exercise ing drawing out 30- - 1 hours in time in every day. I play with the once *r ing certainly may draw out one small Duan time , watch one meeting TV or.

　　Certainly need only 1 hour. This it is my winter holidays to plan!

my winter holiday英語作文6

　　The Winter HolidayI like the winter holiday very much.Though it's very short，I can enjoy the Spring Festival.I can watch cartoon every day.I needn't go to school frepuently.

　　Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.With the festival coming，I can play all the time.I can play video game with my brother.I am good at playing PC game.So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home.We had dinner together.It's so lively that I'am very happy.

　　But I still have to do my homework.

my winter holiday英語作文7

　　Tonight, we had finished our dinner, want to go out for a walk, and so the whole family came to jinghu park. Beautiful jinghu park appear more gorgeous, in the darkness of the attractions lake architectural lights are reflected in the water, the lake set off more lively, several boat gently floating in the water.

　　Fountain square, lights, lawn lamp, lamp, decorated with beautiful kiang wu.

　　Oh, its waters are beautiful at night!

my winter holiday英語作文8

　　Winter vacation is like a book, I wrote in each page belongs to own happiness and wonderful.

　　Had a holiday, although learning is essential. Therefore, I give myself made a study schedule: morning, I finish my homework seriously; Reference books in the afternoon, I sit at my window, there are "* the pooh", "insects to record", "Robinson Crusoe", etc. As the main characters in the story with me happy, sad, touched, together with anger.

　　Stories like mystery, implicating LIDS I uncovered it, let me in the ocean of knowledge continuously absorb nutrients, thrive.

my winter holiday英語作文9

　　My winter vacation is coming soon .I am so happy I decide to make a winter vacation plan .First, I will do my homework carefully Second ,I am going to help my mother with housework .Then,I want to play with my best friend.I will also visit my grangparents with my parents .We will spendSpring Festival with them.I think every day during my winter vacation will be happy.

　　I am sure I will have a wonderful vacation. I can not wait.

my winter holiday英語作文10

　　During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. I wake up 11 oclock Am everyday, after a washing, I have a good lunch with my parents. Next I play com*r games till the time to have supper. After have dinner. I go on playing till 2 oclock Am, and then go to sleep with tired. This is one dull day of my winter vacation.

　　But I havent bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books, sometime I listen to the music or the radio in the bed，because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. And I also meat some of my good friends during the vacation ,we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis tegether .And I watched the spring festival party of the CCTV in the last seconds of the 2004 year! I think this is the thing most people of china doing at that time.

　　Thats all, all my dull, coldly and snowy winter vacation.

my winter holiday英語作文10篇擴展閱讀

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展1）

——winter英語作文300字5篇

winter英語作文300字1

　　My favorite season is winter.It lasts from December to February.It is the coidest season in the year.In winter,the days are very short.When it comes ,the leaves fall from the trees.When it snows,the ground is white with snow.We can wear warm clothes and go to make snowmen.It is a good season for skating .I like winter best.

　　譯文：

　　冬

　　我最喜歡的'季節(jié)是冬天。它從十二月持續(xù)到二月。它是一年中最冷的季節(jié)。在冬天優(yōu)秀作文 ，白天變短了。當(dāng)它來臨時，葉子都從樹上落下了。當(dāng)下雪時，地面被雪覆蓋為白色。我們可以穿暖和的衣服出去堆雪人。這是滑雪的好季節(jié)。我最喜歡冬季。

winter英語作文300字2

　　My favorite season is winter.It lasts from December to February.It is the coidest season in the year.In winter,the days are very short.When it comes ,the leaves fall from the trees.When it snows,the ground is white with snow.We can wear warm clothes and go to make snowmen.It is a good season for skating .I like winter best.

　　譯文：

　　冬

　　我最喜歡的季節(jié)是冬天。它從十二月持續(xù)到二月。它是一年中最冷的季節(jié)。在冬天優(yōu)秀作文 ，白天變短了。當(dāng)它來臨時，葉子都從樹上落下了。當(dāng)下雪時，地面被雪覆蓋為白色。我們可以穿暖和的衣服出去堆雪人。這是滑雪的好季節(jié)。我最喜歡冬季。

winter英語作文300字3

　　i have a very beautiful cat.its colour is white or yellow .its name ishaahua .ithink it is my favourite cat .she likes sleep playing with the bell .she love ratting meat ,though it is a kind of animals ,i treat it as my friend .

　　sometime i give her some fish or pork to eat .when she sees the fool she begin to cry miao miao .as if she is very hungry and thirsty .wherever i amwalk she follws me .

　　how happy i am !how nice my friend is !i love her more and more .

winter英語作文300字4

　　I had a very happy winter vacation,I went to the west lake of Hangzhou with my father and grandpa,I also went to the house of Lu Xun with my family.

　　During the spring festival, we set off firecrackers and ate the new year's eve, the rice cake,We also set off firecrackersAnd cherry blossoms. I stayed at home for the rest of the time, my winter vacation. I had a great time in this winter vacation！What about your winter vacation？

winter英語作文300字5

　　I like the winter holiday very much.Though it's very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.

　　I can watch cartoon every day.I needn't go to school every day.

　　Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.I can play video game with my brother.

　　I am good at playing PC game.Then more and more relatives came to my home.

　　We had dinner together.But I still have to do my homework.During the holiday,I learned a lot.

　　It's so lively that I'am very happy.I love the winter holiday.

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展2）

——holiday英語作文5篇

holiday英語作文1

　　Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!

　　The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus.

　　Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious.

　　My mouth is now watering again. I will never forget such interesting expirence.

holiday英語作文2

　　Hello! My name is Zhu Hao. I like summer holiday very much.

　　Summer holiday is a long holiday. There are two months. So I can do a lot of things I like. I can go swimming, go for a travel, play with my friends and so on. Last summer holiday, I went to America. I enjoyed the beautiful world under the sea of Hawaii in a U-boat. In the sea, I saw a lot of beautiful fishes, the fishes have beautiful colours, such as red, yellow, blue…… But when I in the deep sea, I surprised that I can’t see red! That’s interesting. After a long time, we went back to the ground. We all had a wonderful time.

　　Do you envy me? Ha ha!

holiday英語作文3

　　Summer holiday is coming . I will travel to Hang zhou with my friends . we will go to Hang zhou is graffiti wall painting. I will go to the playground in Hang zhou.

　　Because i heard that the people of the wheel will be very happy. I hope that wu have a smooth journey. Have a good time ! If you want to travel with us, you can contact me before 20.

holiday英語作文4

　　Summer Holiday

　　Our summer holiday is coming. How exciting! It will last for two months. What shall I do in my summer holiday? Let me tell you.

　　In the morning, I get up at 7:00, and read some books in the yard. Then I have breakfast with my family. After breakfast, I help my father with the farm work. I look after the cow when it eats grass in the fields. It’s very hot, but I’m happy.

　　In the afternoon, I do my homework at home. Sometimes I help my mother cook supper. After supper, I watch TV. I like to watch cartoons. It’s very interesting.

　　I go to bed early, because I’ll get up early the next day.

holiday英語作文5

　　Now, the summer holiday is coming to the end. I really spend a rich but happy holiday. As a junior student, I am not totally free in the summer holiday, because study is still an important part in my life.

　　In the first month of the holiday, I study at home to finish my homework. There are many tasks I have to finish. Besides, I have to go to the English and mathtraining class, because I am weak inthe two subjects. Therefore, I need some extra training. After that, I visit to my father with my mother. My father works in other province and I have not seen him for half a year.

　　My mother and I miss him very much. We spend near a month with him.When my father is free, he often takes us go out. We are happy together.

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展3）

——My英語作文5篇

My英語作文1

　　I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?

　　我的狗

　　我有一只狗。我的狗名叫杜都。都都是9年。都都是脂肪。它穿著一件白大褂。嘟嘟有兩只大眼睛和兩只小耳朵。它有一個簡短的'嘴巴。我的狗很聰明。我喜歡我的狗。你喜歡它嗎?

My英語作文2

　　Everybody has a wish, but thry're all different. me, too, also have a wish. what is my wish, do you want to know? my wish is , i have that wish because . my wish might not be something that's great, but it's my wish. it's very important to me, no what have happened.

My英語作文3

　　今天的天氣雖然不怎么好，可是我的心情是陽光明媚的，因為昨天我寫了一篇作文發(fā)表到優(yōu)秀作文網(wǎng)**，這是大家對我的認(rèn)可和鼓勵，寫作的道路上我才剛剛起步，雖然前方的路還很漫長，但是我相信有了我向老師虛心實意的求教，媽媽不辭辛勞的輔導(dǎo)以及我自己的不懈努力，我一定會越走越好，越走越遠(yuǎn)的。

　　Today's weather is not so good, but my mood is sunny, because yesterday I wrote a composition and published it on the excellent composition website, which is everyone's recognition and encouragement for me. I just started on the road of writing, although the road ahead is still very long, but I believe that with my modest and practical advice from the teacher, my mother's painstaking guidance and my own My unremitting efforts, I will go better and further.

　　今天的我很快樂，雖然我并沒有得到什么，但我感覺自己也能做一些事情了。

　　Today I am very happy, although I did not get anything, but I feel that I can do something.

My英語作文4

　　In ten years,I think the I‘ll be a reporter.I‘ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it‘s really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I‘ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don‘t like living alone.

　　I‘ll have pets.I can‘t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I‘ll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I‘ll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I‘ll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.

　　On the weekends, I‘ll be able to dress more casually. I think I‘ll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.

My英語作文5

　　Ten years later, I write to you for the first time, my mood is unable to use my poor language to express, is very complex, some excitement, are looking forward to, and some fear.

　　I have a lot of question want to ask you, there are many many words can express... .

　　After ten years of I, how are you now? Happiness? Do you still insist on ten years ago that become a cartoonist, a novelist's dream? This dream realized after ten years?

　　Or have forgotten it? Just have a simple job, live a flatly light day?

　　Where more will not be dropped off in the exam, not on the university and was wondering how is good looking for work, lived a poor dog's life?

　　My parents are ok? You have to let them live a good life, healthy? They also like ten years ago young and tall? Or is the white-haired?

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展4）

——winter英語作文 (菁選3篇)

winter英語作文1

　　My winter holiday was very interesting。As that day i got back to my native hometown，cousins and cousines took me to ski。My skiing skill isnt good，got down for 15 times，they laughed at me behind，i cant help smiling， too。The day of Spring Festival was the most happiness day，we had meal for the first，a table of delicious food，that made me so glad。Then we played the fireworks。The childrens waving the lightening ticket while watching the *s playing the fireworks。That was so beautiful！Like the stars rainning down the world。At the end，it was time to get the red bag。we were very exciting，and satisfied。Sometimes，we also went shopping and bought something we like。 Winter holiday life was really wonderful！

　　我的寒假生活非常有趣。剛回老家那天，哥哥姐姐弟弟妹妹就拉著我去溜冰場溜冰。我技術(shù)不好，摔了15個跟頭，他們都在那邊笑我，我也情不自禁的笑了。大年三十那天最開心。先是吃團圓飯，一桌子的美食，讓我大飽口服。然后就是放煙花。我們幾個小孩一邊拿著熒光棒甩，一邊看大人們放煙花。好美��！像降落在人間的星星。最后就是拿紅包拉，我們都很興奮，也很滿足。有時，我們還會去逛街，買一些自己喜歡的東西。 寒假生活真美好！

winter英語作文2

　　This winter holiday， I went to Kunming with my family。 Kunming is a very beautiful city， I think。 The sky is blue and the air is clean。 You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere。 The weather there is great。 Its never too hot or too cold all the year round， so people always call it Spring City。

　　Kunming is surrounded by beautiful scenery。 And one of the most famous views is The Stone Forest。 It is really scenic。

　　We just stayed in Kunming for six days， but I felt very happy， and I like Kunming very much。

　　譯文：

　　這個寒假，我和我的家人去了昆明。我覺得，昆明是一座非常美麗的城市。昆明的天空藍(lán)藍(lán)的，空氣是那么清新。到處都可以看到許多種類的美麗鮮花。那里的天氣也非常棒。全年都不會太熱或太冷，所以人們都稱昆明為春城。

　　昆明周圍有許多美麗的景觀。最著名的風(fēng)景就是石林了。那可是真正的天然景觀。

　　我們雖然只在昆明待了六天，但是我覺得非�？鞓�，而且我非常喜歡昆明。

winter英語作文3

　　The winter holiday is coming. I expect it very much, because the Spring Festival is the most important event in the holiday. First, I will relax myself. This term I work very hard, so during the holiday, I want to have fun.

　　My families will go back to the hometown. We will get together to celebrate the Spring Festival. I like families getting together and organizing various activities. It’s funny and warm. Of course, study can’t be ignored. After the festival, I will spend some time on my study. There will be exercises for the holiday. And I will do some reviews for next term. Math is my weakness, so I must work hard to improve it. This is my plan for winter holiday.

　　寒假即將來臨。我很期待它的到來，因為春節(jié)是這個假期最重要的節(jié)日。首先，我會放松一下自己。這個學(xué)期我學(xué)習(xí)很努力，所以假期期間我想玩玩。我的家人會回老家過節(jié)，我們將一起慶祝春節(jié)。

　　我喜歡家人團聚在一起**各種各樣的.活動，有趣而又溫暖。當(dāng)然，學(xué)習(xí)也是不容忽視的。春節(jié)過后，我會花些時間在學(xué)**。我會完成一些寒假作業(yè)然后預(yù)習(xí)一些下學(xué)期的內(nèi)容。數(shù)學(xué)是我的弱項，因此我必須努力提高它。這就是我的寒假計劃。

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展5）

——my weekend英語作文10篇

my weekend英語作文1

　　On last weekend , I cleaned my room on Saturday. And I went fishing with my family.On last Sunday, I climbing mountains with my parents . I watched TV on last Sunday afteroon. I did my homework on my last Sunday evening. My last weekend was very happy! How about you?

　　翻譯：

　　上個周末，我在星期六打掃了我的房間。并且我和我的'家人去釣魚了。在上個星期天，我和我的父母去爬山了。我在上個星期天下午看了電視。我還在上個星期天晚上做了我的作業(yè)。我上個周末是非�？鞓返�!你呢?

my weekend英語作文2

　　My weekend is very interesting. On Saturday morning, we have lesson from eight o'clock to ten to twelve in the school.

　　We have chinese, Maths and English on this day,On saturday afternoon, I play com*rs and listen to music, sometimes I do my homework when the homework is too much, on sunday I play guitar at XinJieKou.

　　I can take No.27 bus there, And I usually study TOFEL in the evening.

my weekend英語作文3

　　Do you want to know my weekend?

　　I had a busy weekend.On Saturday,the weather was great.It was sunny all day.So I had a good time.On Saturday morning,I went to the library.I read a book about Chinese.In the after-noon,I went to the mountains with my classmates.And on Saturday evening,I cleaned my ro-om.Oh!How about Sunday?On Sunday,the wather was cloudy.On Sunday morning,I did my homework.It was't difficult.And in the afternoon ,Istayed at home.And I sawan interesting so-ap opera.

　　On Sunday night,I visited my grandparents.My grandmother cooked dinner for me.

　　Please tell me about your weekend!

my weekend英語作文4

　　I have a busy weekend,On Satursday,I cleaned my room.

　　In the afteroon,I did my homework,It was a little diffcult,In the night,I visit my aunt,my aunt cooked dinner for me.On Sunday ,I went to the library I read a book about geography,Then in the afternoon,I played soccer with my friend,in the night,I wathed TV.

my weekend英語作文5

　　I visited my aunt.My aunt cooked dinner for me.Im very happy.But Im at home,Im not happy I played com*rgame on last weekend I think comptuergame is very interesting.

　　So I like it very much.

　　我去拜訪我的姑姑。姑姑為我做飯。我很高興。但我在家，我不快樂，我玩電腦游戲在上周末我覺得電腦游戲很有趣。

　　我很喜歡它。

my weekend英語作文6

　　This week I am very busy, because I have many things to do. On Monday morning, I have English. I think it’s interesting. Then on Tuesday afternoon I have science. Next on Wednesday morning I have geography.

　　It’s boring, but on Thursday afternoon I have music. On Friday afternoon, I have English .On Saturday morning I go shopping with my mother. On Saturday afternoon I play football with my friends. What a busy week I have!

my weekend英語作文7

　　The weekend is coming.I am going to have a happy weekend.

　　I want to have a good sleep weekend.In the morning,I am going to do my homework.In the afternoon，I am going to review my homework.And I am going to do lots of exercise.My favorite exercise is ping-pong.

　　At night,I am going to clean my bedroom.And I am going to see the movies and read the newspapers.It will be a happy weekend.

　　周末就要來了。我將有一個快樂的周末。

　　我想有一個好的睡眠。早上,我要做我的家庭作業(yè)。下午,我要去檢查我的作業(yè)。和我要做大量的運動。我最喜歡的運動是乒乓球。

　　在晚上,我要去打掃我的臥室。和我去看電影和閱讀報紙。這將是一個快樂的周末。

my weekend英語作文8

　　Today is Friday.I'm planning a weekend.

　　I will have a picnic. I invite my friend and my parents.My friend will bring some bread and a bottle of jam because it's taste delicious.My parents and I will bring some soft drinks.We will meet at the park at 9o'clock.

　　I hope we will have a great time!

my weekend英語作文9

　　I was very busy last weekend .On Satunday morning.

　　I did my homework ,it was a little difficult.In the afternoon ,I cleaned my room.Saturday,I watched TV.On Sunday morning.I visited my grandqarents.Then in the afternoon ,I went to the library,on Sunday nigth ,I stayed at home studied.

my weekend英語作文10

　　Last weekend English play show was a great success. There were fourteen English shows. They were quite interesting and made us laugh all the time.

　　Cinderella was very beautiful，and stepmother was very ugly and angry. My friend Zhu Bin performed a bird, very cute and beautiful. Though the story was just so-so, all the actors and actresses worked hard! What a happy weekend!

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展6）

——my mother英語作文10篇

my mother英語作文1

　　I came back to school after the summer vacation. As soon as I settled down, I made a phone call to my mother. When I talked to her, I could not hold back my tears. “After all,” I said, “You’re my mother.”

　　During the vacation, mother and I had a quarrel. After that we were unwilling to talk with each other. She thought I was her sweet daughter and I believed that she did not respect me. Then after few days, I left home. My mother gave me a full package of home-make food and she said to me, “I cook this morning, take this then you can have it on the train.” However, I refuse to take it. I just turned away and slam the door without saying goodbye to my mother. I was still angry about her. “You’re still my good girl.” My mother said in a low voice chocked with sob.

　　On the train I could not eat anything, I felt terrible. How I wish I had said sorry to my mother before I left. Now all I want to say is, will you forgive me, my dear mother?

my mother英語作文2

　　I have a great mother. She is 36 years old this year She cares much about me in my life and .When I after school every day she had cooked the food.Every weekend she put the home health do clean， my good mother， I love you!

my mother英語作文3

　　My Mother isa kind and gentle woman. She is always very gentle. She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school. I have one brother and two sistets. So she gets four children in all. She gives us every comfort. We all love her and she loves us also.

　　My mother has too much to do in bringing us up. As our family is too poor to keep a servant, my mother has always to do very much work. She gets up very early and sleeps very late every day. She works hard, yet without complaining.

　　She is also a thrifty, and industrious woman. She saves every cent that she can and keeps everything in order. As she has been busy eversince she was young, she looks older than she really is. Her face is wrinkled, her hair becomes silver white, but she works as hard as ever.

　　Often she says to us, work while you work, play while you play. If you do not work, you will become lazy and of no use to society. What piece of good advice this is! We must worth it well and always keep it in our mind.

my mother英語作文4

　　There is no doubt that mother is the greatest person in the world. She gives us life and takes care of us all the time. No matter how old we are, we are always her babies in their eyes. As I grow up, I become responsible and feel the great burden of my mother. I am so thankful for the things she did for me.

　　My mother has told many lies. For example, when we had dinner, she would tell me that she didn’t like to eat meat or wanted to lose weight, so she left the main dishes to me. When I asked her why she didn’t travel with her friends, she said she liked to stay at home. But now as I grow up, I see through her mind. She just wants to save money and leaves the best things for me.

　　I know my mother’s lies, so sometimes I also will tell lies. For example, when she asked me if I needed to buy things or needed more pocket money, I would refuse and told her that I had enough things. The love my mother gives me makes me become stronger. I am so grateful to her.

my mother英語作文5

　　My mother is the greatest person to me, she takes care of my every day. In the morning, she cooks the breakfast and then wakes me up, she helps me pack my schoolbag. Then in the afternoon, she waits me to come home, asks me to do the homework. She does all the things till I sleep, I want to say I love my mother so much.

my mother英語作文6

　　I love my mother.She is tall and thin.She has long and black 還r.She is very beautiful.She is about 30 years old.

　　She is a good teacher.She is strict about her students's studies.Everyday she left her students' hall, but she also pay attention to their learning.She is very busy.Even on Saturday and Sunday, she will put own day as preparation.Even if she is so busy, she still finds time to help me with my studies and plays ball games with me.

　　She is hard-working ,kind and patient.I remember one time I went to a picnic.She looks after me all the way.She has two children，one is me,another is my elder brother.My mother like us very much.

　　I like her very much!I hope my family will happily all the way.

　　我愛我的媽媽。她又高又瘦。她有長長的、黑頭發(fā)。她很漂亮。她30歲左右。

　　她是個好老師。她對學(xué)生的`學(xué)習(xí)要求嚴(yán)格。每天雖然她離開了她的學(xué)生宿舍，但她也很關(guān)心他們的學(xué)習(xí)。她很忙。即使在星期六和星期日，她會為自己的一天做準(zhǔn)備。即使她很忙，她還是會抽出時間來幫助我學(xué)習(xí)還有和我一起打球。

　　她勤勞，善良和耐心。我記得有一次我去野餐。她全程照顧我。她有兩個孩子，一個是我，另一個是我的哥哥。我媽媽喜歡我們。

　　我非常喜歡她!我希望我的家人一直會很幸福。

my mother英語作文7

　　My mother is very good.She is 35.She is very nice.She is a boss. She likes purpie.She likes eggs.She likes dogs and cats.She likes vegetable very much.I like my mother

　　中文：

　　我的媽媽非常棒。她今年35歲。她非常和藹。她是個老板。她喜歡紫色。她喜歡吃雞蛋。她喜歡小狗和小貓。她非常喜歡吃蔬菜。我喜歡我媽媽。

my mother英語作文8

　　Like many other Chinese women, my mother is diligent. She works in a primary school. In order to teach well, she prepares her lectures very carefully and often works so late at night.

　　My mother is very kind and sincere. She gets along with her neighbors and colleagues. When they have difficulties, she is always ready to lend them a helpful hand. Therefore she is loved and respected in our neighborhood. From Joozone.

　　Mother often tells me to be honest and upright. She expects me to be useful to the people in the future. Up to now, I still remember her saying: Do as much as you can and you will succeed.

my mother英語作文9

　　My mother often says her family is the most precious things to her daughter.

　　Mother in around me all the day, both have to work and to do household chores, also help me do the homework, tired mother do sweet and delicious meals for me every day, can cover the quilt for me in the evening everyday, make time for me to wash clothes, dressed me clean and beautiful.

　　Ah, mother do so many things for me, I should return for mom, but should return how mom? I think, think of now study hard, to help my mother do housework, grew up I was ready to take mom she wanted to go, let mother roam the world, to go on vacation to Hawaii, to go to see the pyramids of Egypt, to Europe to see the Eiffel Tower... I also want to give mom bought glittering jewelry, the mother dress nicely. I also want to buy a big house for mother, let mother comfortably good every day.

　　Do I have to let mother the happiest mother in the world.

　　我的媽媽常說她家最寶貴的東西就是她的女兒。

my winter holiday英語繪本

　　媽媽整天都在圍著我轉(zhuǎn)，既要工作又要做家務(wù)，還要輔導(dǎo)我做作業(yè)，疲倦的媽媽天天為我做香甜可口的飯菜、天天晚上都會為我蓋被子，擠出時間為我洗衣服，把我打扮得干干凈凈，漂漂亮亮。

　　哎，媽媽為我做了這么多事兒，我應(yīng)該回報媽媽，可是應(yīng)該怎么回報媽媽呢?我冥思苦想，想到現(xiàn)在認(rèn)真讀書，幫媽媽做家務(wù)事，長大了我準(zhǔn)備把媽媽帶到她想去的地方，讓媽媽遨游整個世界，到夏威夷去度假，到埃及去看金字塔，到歐洲去看艾菲爾鐵塔……我還要給媽媽買金光閃閃的首飾，把媽媽打扮的漂漂亮亮。我還要給媽媽買一棟大房子，讓媽媽舒舒服服地過好每一天。

　　我一定要讓媽媽成為世界上最幸福的媽媽。

my mother英語作文10

　　My mother and I are cattle, 33 years old, she looks fat, medium build, laugh when the left side of the face always have a dimple.

　　May be a cow's sake, my mother is working very seriously. As a result of the relationship between the work, my mother often need to go out by bus, and sometimes to a very far place, you must transfer to several buses to, and back also late. I remember one time, my mother finished a review of a company in Sichuan, home has been 10 o'clock at night, but my mother did not care to eat dinner yet. Mother's work is very hard.

　　Mother not only love their work, but also very concerned about my study. Since childhood, my mother often tell me stories, teach me to read the word. Now, as long as there is time, my mother gave me check the work, accompany me to listen to English, to help me prepare homework. Not long ago, my mother in order to improve my writing level, but also specifically for me to write an essay tutorial. Mom also often give me books, there are animals, there are literary masterpieces ... ...

　　I am so happy, because I have a hard-working kind, care for me, love my good mother.

　　我的媽媽和我一樣是屬牛的，今年33歲了，她長得胖胖的，中等身材，笑起來的時候左邊的臉上總是有一個酒窩。

　　可能是屬牛的緣故，我的媽媽工作非常認(rèn)真。由于工作的關(guān)系，媽媽需要經(jīng)常坐公交車外出，有時到很遠(yuǎn)的地方，必須換乘好幾輛公交車才到，而且回來的也很晚。記得有一次，媽媽參加完淄川一家企業(yè)的審核，回到家已經(jīng)晚上10點鐘了，可媽媽還沒顧得上吃晚飯呢。媽**工作非常辛苦。

　　媽媽不但熱愛自己的工作，還非常關(guān)心我的學(xué)習(xí)。從小時候起，媽媽就經(jīng)常給我講故事、教我認(rèn)字。現(xiàn)在，只要有時間，媽媽就給我檢查作業(yè)、陪我聽英語、幫我預(yù)習(xí)功課。前不久，媽媽為了提高我的作文水*，還專門給我報了一個作文補習(xí)班。媽媽還經(jīng)常給我買書，有關(guān)于動物的、有文學(xué)名著……

　　我真幸福，因為我有一個勤勞善良、關(guān)心我、愛護我的好媽媽。

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展7）

——Saving water英語作文10篇

Saving water英語作文1

　　The world is not only hungry, hut also thirsty for water. This may seem strange to you. since nearly 75 % of the earths surface is covered with water. But about 97% of this huge amount is sea water, or salt water. Man can only drink -and use the other the fresh water that comes from rivers, lakes.underground- and other sources. And we cannot even use all of that, because some of it is in ihe form of icebergs and glaciers. Even worse, some of it has been polluted.

　　However, as. things stand today, this small amount of fresh water, which is constantly being replaced by rainfall, is still enough for us. Hut our need for water is increasing rapidly almost day by day. Only if wc take steps to deal with this problem now can wc avoid a severe worldwide water shortage later on. A limited water sup* would have a bad effect on agriculture and industry. Let rne give you just one small example of how necessary water is to industry. Did you know that to produce a single ton of steel, il takes about 91*000 liters of water?

　　We all have to learn how to stop wasting our precious water. One of Ihe first steps wc should take is to develop ways of reusing it. Experiments have already been done in this field, but only on a small scale. For us. the systems are as important as the spacecraft.

Saving water英語作文2

　　So,everyone should take measure to protect and save the valuable and important water resource.For example,we can tighten taps after using it .We can take shore faster.We can use the second water like using cloth washed water to wash cars.

　　I believe we can be action ,the wasting water resource condition must get change.Let’s go everyone!

Saving water英語作文3

　　Water is very important to us.If you don’t have water for three days,you will die.We can use water for flowers,swimming,washing and many different things.We use it to cook,make electricity,put out fires and so on.We use millions of liters of water every day.

　　Do you know how does the water come to your home?It travels through water pipes.Some are long and wide but some are short and narrow.

　　Then the water travels through the water pipes to the reservoirs.Then it travels through the water pipes to the river and to the special factories (we call water plants) that purify the water.When the water is purified,we can drink it.Please don’t leave garbage in the water on which we line,and keep the water clean.

Saving water英語作文4

　　Saving water

　　As we all know water plays an important part in peoples daily lives. More and more water is needed in the modern society. So we should try to save it.

　　Now many places are short of water. For example, a big drought hit the Southwest of China at the beginning of this year. especially Yunnan province, milions of people has not got enough water for common life. A lot of rivers and lakes are polluted. Whats worse, many people are wasting water seriously.

　　In order to protect water, lets do something to fight against all kinds of pollution and waste of water.

Saving water英語作文5

　　In todays society, many people think that water is inexhaustible and inexhaustible, and it is abusing water resources. But as we all know, only fresh water is available for us to enjoy in the world, so we should save water.

　　Nowadays, people have been abusing the water resources, but have they ever wondered what the consequences will be? I believe everyone should have seen a TV advertisement: a tap has been dripping slowly and dripping after a few drops, and then a weeping eye, followed by a slogan that our pupils know - "if we dont cherish every drop of water today, then we dont cherish every drop of water. The last drop of water we will see will be our tears.

　　People can hardly leave water for almost a day. The fetus needs amniotic fluid, the baby needs milk, the * needs 2000ml water every day, the human body does not take water for 3 days, and the water will be short of water. The water is not taken in the 5 day, and the water will die because of the lack of water. If our country has no water, it can buy water from other countries, but if there is no water in the world, mankind will perish.

　　Now, when facing the limited water, what shall we do? First of all, we can start from me, start from the little things around us, and form a good habit of saving water. For example, water washing and wash water can be used to flush the toilet; fish water can be used to water flowers, which can also accelerate the growth of flowers and flowers; washing rice water can be used to wash dishes or wash cloth, and oil is very good; washing the last two times of water in the washing machine can be picked up to wash mop, tow tow tow tow tow tow floor, brush sole. ...... In a word, water is an invaluable resource that can not be replaced. Treasure the water is to cherish life! Finally, I appeal to you: save every drop of water, start with me, and start from every little thing around us. - save water, is everyones responsibility!

Saving water英語作文6

　　"Tick, tick..." Listen, the water is groaning in pain, the voice is low and heavy, the water will not use the language to express his inner sadness, but the water drops always remember how much harm human beings have on themselves. They mourn for what mankind has done, and sigh for the shameful way of human beings.

　　In all the resources of the world, water is invaluable, because human existence can not live without water, 70% of the human body is water, and once the water is left, the possibility of human survival is 0%. Seven days without food can survive, but not for seven days, that is to the point of death.

　　In my memory, there was a scene that made me close to my heart. I went to my mothers unit and went into a water room on the way. I was silent. The floor is full of water, clear water for being ruthless trample became black mud. I raise my head to a row of stiff, taps are uniform open, empty house...... The roaring waves of animals are splashing and noisy. I walked quickly rushed to step off the tap. I was dee* absorbed in my meditation: if mankind doesnt save water from now on, the last drop of water that human beings will see is their tears. I cant help but feel a bit of fear and dread. Everyone knows that water is an irreplaceable valuable resource. Everyone can put this phrase on the lips, not really put water saving consciousness in his mind.

　　I saw how many heartbreaking pictures in the Internet, how poor people in those serious water scarcity areas, and in their eyes I saw their desire for pure water, and I saw all this in tears...

　　Saving water and benefiting mankind is of great progress in the contemporary era. We should set up a good fashion for saving water, and lets start from now on.

Saving water英語作文7

　　A man is washing his clothes regardless of the notice above "save the water Please."

　　As we see water is the source of life. But there is a very limited available water resource in our world. so we shouldnt waste it. Of course we have to use it to drink cook wash clean and etc. But we must remember not to use it extravagantly. If we didnt stop such wasteful habits we would cut off the development of the world and the human life.

Saving water英語作文8

　　All plants and animals need water.we also need water.water is neened on farms,in schools and factories.water is very important for living things.None and nothing can live without water.Everbody Knows this,but not all of us save the water.For example,someone doesnt turn off the tap after washing.Although they know water is very important,but they dont know the more water we use,the less water is.

　　Lets save the water together from now on.

Saving water英語作文9

　　Water is very important to us.If you don not have water for three days,you will die.We can use water for flowers,swimming,washing and many different things.We use it to cook,make electricity,put out fires and so on.We use millions of liters of water every day.

　　Do you know how does the water come to your home?It travels through water pipes.Some are long and wide but some are short and narrow.Then the water travels through the water pipes to the reservoirs.Then it travels through the water pipes to the river and to the special factories (we call water plants) that purify the water.When the water is purified,we can drink it.Please don not leave garbage in the water on which we line,and keep the water clean.

Saving water英語作文10

　　It’s our duty to save water

　　As we know , water is very important to man. we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it .They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers , too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展8）

——夏天英語作文10篇

夏天英語作文1

　　Summer is the great season for all sports in the open air. It is the season for baseball which is often called the national sport because of its popularity. I usually watch television and read the

　　newspaper reports about the baseball results of the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the little leagues. During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home in the village. I usually go there bur in the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the city. I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet of the villagers.

　　請參考作文地帶翻譯：

　　夏天是個美麗的季節(jié)，因為我們可以做戶外運動。在夏天是屬于 一個非常流行并被稱作是全**動(Joozone Note：國球)的棒球的季節(jié)。我經(jīng)常觀看電視和閱讀一些關(guān)于棒球比賽結(jié)果的報紙與棒球小聯(lián)賽的'比賽結(jié)果。夏天我喜歡去海濱，種種程度上是因為那離我家(度假村)很近。在城市幾個月的上學(xué)后，我們可以在暑假去那放松放松。農(nóng)村人的熱情及農(nóng)村的安靜讓我感覺異常的舒適。

夏天英語作文2

　　Summer opened his eyes and saw a beautiful painting. Outside the rain next stop, the rain fell to the ground, gathered into a shallow stream. The creek emerge a small bubble, and then disappeared, like hide and seek, really interesting. I thought: how did these bubbles form? Suddenly, a little rain falls on my face, it is cool, it can be really naughty. A tree in the rain painful to wash the bath, the leaves become more green; a blossoming flowers in the rain gently swing, more bright, and showing a vibrant life.

　　Summer opened his eyes and knew they were calling. I thought: do not they not? Really want to send ice sticks to give them moisturizing voice.

　　Summer eyes see a colorful world.

　　夏天一睜開眼睛，就看到一幅美麗的畫。外面小雨下個不停，雨點落在地上，匯聚成一條條淺淺的小溪。小溪里冒出一個個小泡泡，一會兒又消失了，像是捉迷藏，真有趣。我想：這些泡泡是怎樣形成的呢？突然，一顆小雨點落在我的臉上，很涼爽，它可真調(diào)皮。一顆顆樹在雨中痛痛快快地洗著澡，葉子變得更綠了；一朵朵花兒在雨中輕輕搖擺著，更鮮艷了，呈現(xiàn)出勃勃生機。

　　夏天一睜開眼睛，知了們在叫個不停。我想：難道它們不？真想送冰棒給它們潤潤嗓子。

　　夏天的眼睛看到了一個多彩的世界。

夏天英語作文3

　　When July comes, it is the hottest time of the whole summer. Many of my friends have chosen to travel to the cool place, so as to avoid the stuffy air. As for me, I don’t like to travel in this hot weather. I just want to stay indoors and enjoy the quiet moment. I like to sit near the window, watching outside scenery. Sometimes I will read some books, enjoy the novel and make myself lost in the fiction world. The things I like to do most is to find a coffee shop and then choose a table that is near the window, so that I can see all the situation. I will bring my com*r and then play the com*r for the whole afternoon. It is what I like to do in the summer. I enjoy it.

　　七月到來之際，是整個夏天最熱的時候。我很多朋友都選擇去涼爽的地方旅行，順便躲避悶熱的空氣。對于我來說，我不喜歡在這種炎熱的天氣旅行，我只想呆在家里，享受安靜的時刻。我喜歡坐在窗戶旁邊，看外面的風(fēng)景。有時我會看一些書，享受小說的熏陶，沉迷于小說的世界里。我最喜歡做的事就是找一家咖啡店，然后選擇一張靠近窗戶的桌子，這樣我就可以看到所有的場景。我會帶上我的電腦，然后玩一整個下午。這是我在夏天喜歡做的事。我也非常享受這樣的時刻。

夏天英語作文4

　　Summer morning, the sun slowly exposed his head, the earth are red.

　　The sun is getting higher and higher, the grass on the "pearl" quietly slip away; dog hot can not stand, put the tongue spit out; little ducks do not go swimming in the river, Of the constant call: "Twist! Twist! Squeak!" As if to say: "really hot ah!

　　At noon, the sun shone bright light, like the earth baked like. The leaves rolled up, like a shy little girl; only the sun flower flowers in full bloom. Fish hiding in the grass can not appear in the grass, the streets are increasingly scarce, only a few cars back and forth to Mercedes-Benz.

　　Summer, really hot beauty!

　　夏天的`早晨，太陽慢慢地露出了頭，把大地都映紅了。

　　太陽越升越高，小草上的“珍珠”悄悄地溜走了；狗熱得受不了，把舌頭吐進(jìn)吐出的；小鴨子也不再去河里游泳了，在樹下乘涼；樹上的知了不停地叫：“唧！唧！吱吱吱！”仿佛在說：“真熱啊！真熱啊！”

　　中午，太陽射出耀眼的光芒，像把大地烤焦似的。樹葉卷了起來，好像害羞的小姑娘；只有太陽花鮮花怒放。魚兒躲在水草叢中不敢露面，大街上的人越來越稀少，只有幾輛汽車來回地奔馳著。

　　夏，真是火熱的美！

夏天英語作文5

　　After a thunderstorm, I opened the door, a cool and fresh air blowing.

　　Out of the house, I came to the park, exquisite petite girls are wearing a white T-shirt and sky blue skirt, playing in the shade. Pond, lotus opened, pink pink, swaying with the wind. Green and green leaves floating on the water, like a big disc. Small frogs sitting on the plate, leisurely "quack" with, as if to say: "Hello, hello, how are you?"

　　At noon, the sun rose to the south, emitting a dazzling light, people think clothes like a fire. Cicada hot "know know" desperately called.

　　Home, sweat has long been wet through my short-sleeved shirt. I went straight to the refrigerator, took out a big watermelon, cut to eat, cool and so sweet, cool!

　　Ah, beautiful, hot, cool ice, sweet summer!

　　一陣?yán)子赀^后，我打開房門，一股清涼新鮮的空氣撲面而來。

　　走出家門，我來到公園，玲瓏嬌小的女孩都穿著白色的T恤和天藍(lán)色裙子，在樹蔭嬉戲。池塘里，荷花開了，粉紅粉紅的，隨風(fēng)搖曳。碧綠碧綠的葉子浮在水面上，像個大圓盤。小青蛙坐在盤子里，悠閑地“呱呱”著，好象在說：“你好，你好，你好��？”

　　中午，太陽升到正南，放射出耀眼的光芒，讓人覺得衣服好像著了火。蟬熱得“知了知了”拼命地叫。

　　回到家，汗水早已濕透了我的短袖衫。我直奔冰箱，拿出一個大西瓜，切開就吃，涼冰冰甜絲絲，爽！

　　啊，美麗，炎熱，涼冰冰，甜絲絲的夏天！

夏天英語作文6

　　Summer is the most beautiful season, colorful. Bright green, golden, pink, red, all kinds of colors connected, staggered, fluctuating, changing. Look at the park, the red beaver flowers contests; pink lotus pilgrimage; golden beauty of the banana flowers to drop; then look at the red pomegranate flowers, is constantly blowing a small speaker welcome the arrival of the summer.

　　Summer is the most vibrant season, vigorous up. Cricket and frogs combination band, singing a melodious sounds of wonderful songs; small fish from time to time floating on the surface spit a string of small bubbles, stuck his head to take a deep, duck "porphyrin" soon jump to the water, Hit round halo, a circle spread to open ... ...

　　I like summer. Because the meteors and summer have a date, that bright light like an angel in the starry night night to draw a beautiful arc; thunderstorm and summer have a date, fresh rain after the rain with a fragrant soil; rainbow and summer There is a date, that colorful colors unparalleled, is a supreme beauty!

　　I like summer. Because I can enjoy the enjoyment of swimming in the water happy, enjoy the experience of walking in the square, such as flying the speed of ice-skating, enjoy the cold taste of all kinds of cool cold ice cream delicious ... ...

　　Chunhua Qiushi, are hot summer care, summer is a new starting point, the growth of new hope and look forward to!

夏天英語作文7

　　i like summersummer is the second season of the year. in summer ,the weather is very hot ,the sky is very blue . we can eat ice-cream and go swimming in summer.we are very happy.look! the bees busy pioking honey,the butterflies are dansing. how beautiful summer is. summer is a poen. summer is a song. i like summer!do you like summer?

夏天英語作文8

　　Nowadays，when it comes to summer, we can’t ignore the fact that the temperature grows higher and higher. Frankly speaking, air-condition has become a must in our daily life owing to the hot summer.

　　如今，當(dāng)談?wù)摰较奶鞎r，我們絕對不能夠忽視氣溫越來越高這個事實。坦率地說，由于高溫的夏天，空調(diào)已經(jīng)成為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中的一個必需品。

　　From my point of view, summer time has become a period which let people feel uncomfortable. The circumstance of summer is not as comfortable as it used to be. Furthermore, many lovely small animals have slowly disappeared. Take the firefly as an example, the firefly has attractive light at night, and it can bring much jocundity to kids. In recent years, we almost cannot see it. Summer’s topic has changed from enjoyment into suffering. At the same time, we have lost too much joyfulness and quietude.

　　在我看來，夏日的時光已經(jīng)成為一段讓人們感覺不舒服的時間了。夏天再也不像以前那么舒適了。而且，許許多多可愛的小動物也已經(jīng)在悄然消失了。就拿螢火蟲來說，螢火蟲在夜晚有很吸引人的光芒，能夠帶給孩子們很多快樂。最近這些年，我們幾乎看不到它了。夏日的主題已經(jīng)從歡樂轉(zhuǎn)變成煎熬了。與此同時，我們也失去了太多的快樂和寧靜。

　　Why does the summer get so terrible? With the development of society, we should have a higher life standard, but actually there are environment problems which influence people’s life. The high temperature is the best instance to explain the existed environment issues. On the one hand, many factories have produced much pollution which can make temperature become higher. On the other hand, a lot of people don’t really realize the importance of protecting the environment. They have not enough awareness to understand that protecting environment is to save themselves.

　　為什么夏天會變得如此糟糕呢?隨著社會的發(fā)展，我們應(yīng)該是會有一個更好的生活水*，但是，這里實際上確實存在著許多能夠影響人們生活的環(huán)境問題。高溫就是一個最好的例子去說明存在的環(huán)境問題。一方面，很多工廠產(chǎn)生了污染，而這些污染會促使溫度升高。另一方面，許多人并沒有真正意識到保護環(huán)境的重要性。他們不能夠充分明白保護環(huán)境其實就是拯救他們自己這個事實。

　　We need such a summer: happy insect language, clear river, comfortable temperature, fresh air.

　　我們真正需要的是這樣的一個夏天：歡快的蟲語，清澈的河水，舒適的溫度，清新的空氣。

　　Anyone is supposed to take actions to save our life environment. Let our summer become more dynamic!

　　任何人都應(yīng)該獻(xiàn)出自己的一份力量去拯救我們的生活環(huán)境。讓我們的夏天充滿活力吧!

夏天英語作文9

　　Spring just to the summer atmosphere is overwhelming to flutter.

　　Summer has a strange character, it is fiery, mature, with a different charm, while a while sunny, while the rain, like a naughty child.

　　Summer is the season of flowers. A variety of flowers here a, there a cluster, large tracts of out of the infinite beauty. Red, yellow, blue, pink, white ... ... the summer dress up colorful; summer rain just over will be able to see the rain splashing water spray, colorful umbrella ... ... the summer dressed vitality. Can not last long.

　　The The sun is like a grilled sweet potatoes, the earth hot red, hot, and even a variety of small creatures are not let go: people sweat like a rain, the dog every day spit tongue heat, issued Haha's voice, the flowers are tan thin bones. Everyone is wearing short-sleeved shorts, holding a fan in the hands of fans fan, or can not resist the power of the sun. At this time: air conditioning, swimming, eating ice, it became the most desirable.

　　I like summer.

　　春剛?cè)�，夏天的氣息正在鋪天蓋地地?fù)鋪怼?/p>

　　夏天擁有著奇特的性格，它火烈、成熟，有著與眾不同的魅力，同時一會兒晴，一會兒雨，像一個頑皮的'小孩子。

　　夏天是花的季節(jié)。各種各樣的花兒這兒一朵，那兒一簇，大片大片的開出無限的美麗。紅的、黃的、藍(lán)的、粉的、白的……把夏天裝扮的五彩繽紛；夏雨剛過就能看見雨天濺起的水花，五顏六色的傘花……把夏天打扮的生機勃勃。可好景不長。

　��？太陽就像一顆剛烤熟的地瓜，把大地燙的紅通通，熱騰騰，連各種小生物都不放過：人們個個汗如雨下，小狗一天到晚吐著舌頭散熱，發(fā)出哈哈的聲音，花兒也被曬得瘦骨如柴。每個人都穿著短袖短褲，手上拿著扇子不停的扇呀扇，還是抵擋不了太陽的威力。在這時：冷氣、游泳、吃冰，就成了人們最向往的了。

　　我喜歡夏天。

夏天英語作文10

　　Summer is coming.

　　The tree have new,green leaver. Flowers is very lovely.Its hot in summer.We wear shorts ,T-shirt and sandals.

　　In summer,I like swimming in the swimming pool,I wear a swimsuit and glasses.I like summer.

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展9）

——兔子英語作文10篇

兔子英語作文1

　　1.Rabbit is an cute kind of amimals.It has two long ears.They can make rabbits hear carefully.It also has a short tail.They make rabbits so lovely.Rabbits likes carrots.If you are lonely.You can keep a rabbit.It can be your friends.

　　2.The little Rabbit has a coat of white hair. The two ears are long and prick up on its head. It is furry,soft and white with two red eyes glaring above the chin.Its eyes are like a pair of small red hulbs. Exposed to sunlight, they become little pieces of red thread. Its ears are straight and long and they can turn and move slightly.How cute it is!

兔子英語作文2

　　I have a small rabbit in my house. It is my 10 birthday present from my father. Its hair is soft, like a fluffy little white ball. It looks like a small white cloud floating on the ground in the distance.

　　It is the day most of the time in the rest, rest it, before the two feet forward, like lying like, very quiet, sometimes turning mouth from time to time like eaten one of a, it is sleeping, like a dream. Another time, it should eat in asleep, I guess it must be in the.

　　Although this rabbit is very cute, but it also has naughty time.

　　Once I came to my house with my neighbor's rabbit and played with my rabbit. At noon, I feed the rabbits eat vegetables, they are like the marathon ran like fall over each other to eat, my rabbit took the neighbor rabbit aside like swagger before others. And the neighbor's poor little rabbit looking at his food was snatched. I can't help it, so I have to feed them separately.

　　One night, it was so cold that I put a cloth on the rabbit's nest and went to bed. The second day, I found a table tennis and almost white ball bed, I started to really think that this is the white ball, and then suddenly came to my home without white ball, immediately get a look, turned out to be my beloved little rabbit. It turned out that it was so cold at night that the rabbit felt cold when it was sleeping, and it was three times. Five, two went to my bed and went to sleep. I woke up this morning and found the rabbit in my bed. It made me laugh and cry.

　　Little rabbit, I marvel at your skill and spirit, but I still love you -- lovely little rabbit.

兔子英語作文3

　　I had a lovely little bunny, and it had a nice name called white, because it was covered with snow and white hair, so I gave it the name. It has two long ears of the big ears, a pair of red eyes, with a three mouth.

　　Whenever I get out of school, the first thing is to feed the white. For fear that my mother forgot to feed the white. At this time the white can not wait to run in front of me, his neck stretched long, nose, mouth and beautiful beard kept twitching. See it cute look, I quickly put a bowl of vegetables in the hands of the past. It quickly bite the food, relish to eat up. Look at the way it is eating, I almost drooling. And soon it took the bowl of the leaves and finished, and then fell asleep in the cage. I also found a strange phenomenon, that is, when it was just when the ears are straight, overturned vertical, but then how the ears on the back of it? I kept a whine in my heart, and I went to write homework. Finished the work I called: "white" "white" it clearly erected ears to sleep, heard me call it, ears immediately erected and ran to me, that I have delicious Give it to it. I will tease it to play, white jump to jump, roll to roll, very cute. So I observed for several days, and finally came to a conclusion that is - it is when the ears to eat, eat, when playing happy when the ears are erected old and tall.

　　What are the characteristics of white? Wait for me to observe and then tell you later!

兔子英語作文4

　　I have a cute little bunny. My little rabbit is very lovable. Round a small head on a pair of gray ears on the top, always listening to the surrounding movement. His face with two black gem-like eyes. There is a small mouth, mouth beard seven or eight centimeters long, small rabbit hair is gray, short tail, there are some white spots on the markings, I gave him a Western style called "Zhu "Zhu Di eat when the beard is always the first touch gently, and then a mouth, was swallowed his stomach.

　　Judy often sleeps on the couch, sleep is not too honest, while in the side tummy for a while and went there tummy, while pedal pedal feet, while stretched out his hand, the children you did not say it is not very sleep honest.

　　Zhu Di can be fun, and every time we come out we have to put it into the "little rabbit amusement park," it has been running inside ... ... run ... ... run endless After two or three hours, it was reluctant to go home. Come home it will continue to play until the sweet sleep. Its energy can be really strong ah!

　　I love my little rabbit - Judy. Hope it can take care of my healthy growth.

兔子英語作文5

　　During the summer vacation, I often go to the aunt home to play, because the aunt had two lovely little bunny home.

　　One day, I went to my aunt home, see two little rabbits are eating breakfast! Oh, forget to say the name, one called a small camel, one called Peas. The little camel's ears are clever, and the sound will be erected, and there is a pair of shiny eyes that are so lovely that its body is gray and furry little tail, like a white cotton ball. Its ears will take advantage of the two ears close to his head, looks like a pair of obediently, in fact, it is a very naughty rabbit, sometimes with the "Peas" bounce to play for a while , Sometimes climb on the edge of the carton to look outside, play tired when quiet will eat some carrots, vegetables and grass.

　　Peas may be because of small reasons, looks very honest, it has a pair of gem like the eyes, the body is brown, like the field to see the hare, it is a high jump master it, it can from the sofa Jumped down from the chair and jumped high. The two cute little bunches accompany me for a happy holiday.

兔子英語作文6

　　I had a little rabbit, especially cute, white and white clothes, ruby-like eyes, like the three-leaf clover's mouth, very beautiful! Because, little rabbit clothes snow white, so I gave him a name: white.

　　White is very fond of eating carrots, vegetables. Every time I put the chopped carrots or vegetables to the white eat, it is not the first to eat with relish, eat everywhere, I laughed, white heard my laughter , Then looked up and stared at me, as if to say: laugh laugh, there are so funny? I saw the white staring at me, I do not laugh, white see I do not laugh to continue to eat. White also like to play in the garden, every time I bring the white to the garden to play, it jumped and jumped to the small pond next to the fish watching the pavilion, ah! Little pond in the lotus fragrant ah! No wonder white every time to a small pond next to the original is to be attracted to the flowers ah. I find the white after holding it to Jasmine field where to play, so beautiful jasmine ah!

　　White, yellow, pink. Beautiful! I stood there quietly and quietly. I watched the watch, surprised to call up: already 5 points! I quickly let white home, white also refused to go, was that jasmine fragrance and beautiful attracted. I pretend to go home, white see I want to go home, he hurried to run over, I stopped to pick up it, go home.

　　This is my lovely little rabbit.

兔子英語作文7

　　When my birthday last year, my father bought me a lovely little rabbit, little rabbit leap to jump very lively. Because it was white, so I give it was named for nothing.

　　Little rabbit white white with a white hairs, far look like a regiment Bai Rongrong snowballs. Its ears are long, always straight stand up, eyes like red diamond on the white hairs, a red and white, very beautiful. Small nose both sides has a few empress beard, a gust of wind blowing, beard also slight swing. Its mouth is three petal mouths, like petals, eat, three petal mouths a together, cooperate with the tacit understanding, is very interesting.

　　On one occasion, I wronged, the in the mind very afflictive, locked himself with nothing in his or her home. All be gently touch me, seems to be and I say: "small master, don't injustice, don't injustice, I also very upset." It jumped to the front of the mirror, in front of the mirror in the small rabbit bow, seems to be making friends with a rabbit in the mirror. It is very funny, I laugh out loud.

　　I like the little rabbit in our house, in vain.

兔子英語作文8

　　rabbits

　　One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I'm very happy.

　　From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat boby. They're marvellous.

　　Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn't find them. I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again.

　　I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever.

　　An Old Mouse

　　An old woman has a cat. The cat is now very old. She cannot run fast, and she cannot bite. One day the old cat sees a mouse. she jumps and catches the mouse. But she cannot bite it. So the mouse gets out of her mouth and runs away.Then the old woman is very angry because the cat cannot kill the mouse. She begins to beat the cat. The cat says to her, "Don't beat me. Be friendly to me. When I was young, I did good work for you."

兔子英語作文9

　　I keep a cute little rabbit, because it is near the mouth of a small black spots, so I give it a nice name: dots.

　　Little was wearing a white coat, and a small tail, with a short and fat small but jiongjiongweishen eyes, every now and then look in all directions, it is interested in anything in my house, b, as soon as I put it out of the east, west channeling channeling, like looking for something. Its ears are long and sensitive, with a little pricked up his ears to hear the noise, and then like to hear what, running away. It also has a pair of flexible feet, particularly fast, and often to a sharp turn, a fall, make us laugh, very cute.

　　I go to school every day, it had to be in a cage to eat green vegetables, turnip, very boring. Only wait for me after school, can go out to play with it, this is the most happy moment, it is always a moment jumped on, for a while, don't feel a bit tired. Caves are the sites of its game, it in there playing "hide and seek" with me, playing joyfully. On one occasion, a small dog came running, frighten it quickly jumped into my arms, also are playing the shaking body, seems to frighten not light, then I want to protect it.

　　In my home, it is the most like to trash cans to look for something to eat, make feet are black, I'll give it a bath, go to blow dry again into the cage, each time it is very reluctant, still want to go out to play! Little thing is really naughty and naughty, I like it.

兔子英語作文10

　　【范文】

　　One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I’m very happy.

　　From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat boby. They’re marvellous.

　　Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn’t find them. I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again.

　　I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever.

　　【譯文】

　　有一天,我媽媽給我買了兩個小兔子。我很高興。

　　從此,兩個小兔子成了我的好朋友。他們有兩個小耳朵,紅眼睛,白和胖波比。他們是不可思議的。

　　每天,他們互相玩愉快。有一天,我找不到他們。我問我媽媽:“他們在哪里?“我的母親告訴我,她不知道。最后,我發(fā)現(xiàn)他們在草地上。他們很臟。我很生氣,但是當(dāng)我看著他們可愛的`面孔,我很高興。

　　我愛我的小兔子,他們愛我。他們永遠(yuǎn)是我的好朋友。

my winter holiday英語作文10篇（擴展10）

——英語分析作文10篇

英語分析作文1

　　1.描述圖畫

　　圖畫作文對圖畫的描述應(yīng)在第一段進(jìn)行，且最好在首句即開始。此類作文大部分是一幅圖，也會有兩幅圖出現(xiàn)的情況。如果出現(xiàn)兩幅圖，則很有可能是突顯對比的情況。

　　圖畫上可能沒有任何文字，也可能在上面出現(xiàn)了一句話，也可以單個人物說話或兩個人物對話，也可能在圖畫外寫了總結(jié)性的一句話。大家注意，這一句話或兩句話一般是非常重要的，應(yīng)予譯出。

　　一般說來，對圖畫的描寫不必過長，應(yīng)以簡練、準(zhǔn)確為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

　　2.圖畫類作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　我們想象中的最典型最理想的圖畫題提綱應(yīng)該是下面這樣：

　　1. 描述圖畫

　　2. 推導(dǎo)繪畫者的意圖

　　3. 做出評論

　　對于這一提綱我們來做具體分析，其中第三點更要細(xì)致研究。首先由圖畫引出一種社會現(xiàn)象或社會問題，可以是好的，也可以是不好的。在推導(dǎo)繪畫者的意圖時多是展開說此現(xiàn)象或問題的表現(xiàn)，以證明其引人注目。還有一種可能性是說此現(xiàn)象或問題產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱可直接列出，或還用上述提綱。這時可把簡單意圖推導(dǎo)直接放到第一段描述圖畫之后，而在第二段中說原因。

　　第三段做出評論，有可能只是簡單評論、深化主題就結(jié)束，但這種可能性越來越小了。這一部分很可能說的是辦法，不好的事情就是如何解決的辦法，好的事情就是如何進(jìn)一步發(fā)展的方法。

　　通過上述列表，我們可以看出，多年以來，真實的提綱是怎樣一步步地向我們想象中的理想模式靠近的。對于提綱里面出現(xiàn)的變化和規(guī)律，我們來分析一下。

　　我們仔細(xì)分析，會發(fā)現(xiàn)歷年考研真題基本上都呈現(xiàn)"現(xiàn)象或問題--原因解釋--解決辦法"這樣的模式，但變化非常多。因為我們談?wù)摰募瓤梢允且患�值得弘揚的好事，也可能是一個令人憂心忡忡的社會問題;針對后者我們極有可能需要提出做法;而對于前者，可能解釋一下就結(jié)束了，也可能要寫出相應(yīng)的做法。

　　綜上所述，可以看出，比起圖表作文來，圖畫作文要更靈活，更富于變化。我們一定要多練習(xí)，以達(dá)到一看到圖畫(含圖中和圖邊文字)和提綱(有時有文章標(biāo)題)就能有效地審題解題，構(gòu)造出合理的具體段落的目的。

　　這里面還有個問題，就是舉例子，**來已明確出現(xiàn)了兩次，這一點大家一定要多練習(xí)。

英語分析作文2

　　俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達(dá)能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從*時的課堂學(xué)習(xí)一點一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應(yīng)是一個**體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)名詞不變復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)不加s，前后不一致，以及時態(tài)語態(tài)、句子完整性等方面的錯誤。

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　　1.審題不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評分原則，若文章內(nèi)容不切題，則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確，都會被判為零分。

　　2.拼寫錯誤

　　拼寫是考生應(yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá)，通常會降低作文的檔次。

　　3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題

　　誤：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少動詞

　　在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有動詞來構(gòu)成，如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。

　　誤：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　誤：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

　　還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同，也會出現(xiàn)明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現(xiàn)象。

　　誤：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代詞的誤用

　　英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯誤。

　　誤：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因為對句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識模糊，所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　誤：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能**構(gòu)成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所謂不一致，包括數(shù)的'不一致、時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has;同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

　　改為when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯誤

　　漢語動詞無時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關(guān)重要。例：

　　誤：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.綜合性錯誤

　　綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生*時知識的積累，所以考生應(yīng)該從*時練習(xí)出發(fā)，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水*的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養(yǎng)。

英語分析作文3

　　一、指代方面的錯誤

　　在使用代詞it，he，this，that，which，one等時，前文中應(yīng)出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，這句話中，him和it這兩個代詞都有明確的先行詞，分別是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含義非常清楚。

　　可是，不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時，雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么，但在作文中卻沒有交代清楚，結(jié)果這些代詞非但沒有使行文簡潔，反而造成了意思上的模糊，讓閱卷老師不知所云。

　　誤：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【說明】句1中的they既可指教師，也可指學(xué)生，屬指代不清的。可以把它們中的任意一個改成單數(shù)名詞。因為單數(shù)名詞也可以泛指一類。

　　二、修飾方面的錯誤

　　修飾語應(yīng)緊靠被修飾的成分，并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語的位置不妥當(dāng)，就會造出模棱兩可的病句。

　　誤：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【說明】句1要表達(dá)的是把有害氣體排放到農(nóng)村，還是把工廠遷到農(nóng)村去?顯然修飾語to the countryside的位置放錯了。如句2改變一下結(jié)構(gòu)，就能清楚地表達(dá)要表達(dá)的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的錯誤

　　在一個句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個句子之間，要保持時態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)等的一致。

　　誤：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【說明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯誤

　　這里專指語態(tài)、比較級、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時態(tài)等錯誤。

　　1、誤：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　誤：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　誤：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　誤：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【說明】happen，take place，occur，arise等動詞和動詞詞組一般既不能用作被動結(jié)構(gòu)，也不能作為及物動詞帶賓語的'。但學(xué)生作文中類似的錯誤較多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、誤：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　誤：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　誤：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【說明】這些都是在使用比較形式時出現(xiàn)的錯誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、斷句方面的錯誤

　　一句句子沒有結(jié)束，又開始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。

　　誤：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【說明】以because，since，if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能**成句的，只能依屬于主句，所以不能寫成另一句。

　　六、連詞方面的錯誤

　　作文中缺少必要的連詞，或錯用連詞的現(xiàn)象也比較普遍。

　　誤：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【說明】學(xué)生在寫作中往往意識不到連詞的重要，不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來明確標(biāo)示出因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。

　　七、搭配方面的錯誤

　　學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級作文閱卷中，近千篇作文在表達(dá)上海交通越來越擁擠這個意思時，幾乎沒有一篇用 heavier，大多數(shù)人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。

　　1、誤：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【說明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能與fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以這樣說A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、誤：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【說明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能與expensive，cheap搭配，但可以說In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可見，要提高對詞語搭配的駕馭能力，除了要在*時的閱讀過程中多積累，還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價格貴、學(xué)習(xí)知識、人減少等搭配的影響，避免寫出look book或see book這樣的笑話來。

　　八、誤用方面

　　學(xué)生作文中對詞語的誤用也相當(dāng)普遍，誤用詞語不僅不能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)作者的意思，而且也會鬧出笑話。

　　1、誤：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、誤：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【說明】以上錯句都是因為對形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的，工業(yè)上的應(yīng)為industrial。effect一般用作名詞，其動詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實現(xiàn)，而這里的意思是影響，應(yīng)換成affect。

英語分析作文4

　　⑴話題關(guān)注度

　　考研英語作文通常并非最熱點，因為最熱點也最容易被押中，對考生來說具有投機取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的測試出考生的水*;此外，考題被押中也是命題的失敗。所以一般來說考研寫作的話題會是當(dāng)年的次重點，可能和最熱點有關(guān)系，也可能沒有關(guān)系。

　�、茖懽髑吧�

　　英語二是從20xx年開始設(shè)置的一門考試科目，但事實上它的歷史并非如此短暫，它的前身是MBA，一提到這個很多人，尤其是學(xué)經(jīng)濟的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多練練手，就把MBA的真題找出來做，但事實上MBA的真題并不需要做，因為事物的發(fā)展是一個逐漸成熟，逐漸發(fā)展壯大的過程，早些年的MBA的考題太過簡單，不過建議大家，可以練習(xí)下MBA試卷的寫作部分。

　�、菆D表作文考什么?

　　眾所周知，英語二的寫作就是以圖表作文的形式出現(xiàn)，那圖表作文側(cè)重于考查什么內(nèi)容呢?在英語老師看來，大綱要求上表明了主要考察考生觀察數(shù)據(jù)的能力。但在分析的'時候，只抓住最有特點的數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分析就行，面面俱到就沒有意義了。

　�、葓D表難易度

　　我們都知道，英語二考查的圖表主要分為四類：柱狀圖、餅狀圖、線形圖和表格圖。其中，又以表格圖為最難，餅狀圖最為簡單，而柱狀圖的寫作方法和線形圖較為類似。

　　⑸段落安排

　　英語二的大作文都是essay，所謂的“essay”，不是散文，也不是隨筆，而是短議論文。一般將其分成三段，而且遵循議論文的寫作風(fēng)格，按照提出問題、分析問題和解決問題的思路去行文就可以了。

　�、试~匯

　　很多人覺得詞匯就是在閱讀部分的啊，只有認(rèn)識單詞就能看懂閱讀，會做題了。寫作部分也需要記單詞嗎?對于這個問題，考研英語老師的回答是肯定的。因為如果你不會寫這個單詞，又何談遣詞造句呢?所以，在日常的學(xué)習(xí)備考中，將寫作中所會用到的單詞都記住并掌握，不僅是重要的，而且是必須的。

英語分析作文5

　　為了能更好更全面的做好復(fù)習(xí)和迎考準(zhǔn)備，確保將所涉及的'中考考點全面復(fù)習(xí)到位，讓孩子們充滿信心的步入考場，現(xiàn)特準(zhǔn)備了中考英語作文被扣分的原因。

　　一：先看一下扣分點：

　　1.內(nèi)容方面：要點缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若沒有寫一件具體的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若寫的事情太過于虛幻，沒有實際內(nèi)容，也會扣1-2分。

　　2.字?jǐn)?shù)：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

　　中考英語作文要求60字以上，標(biāo)點符號不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?從我們拿到的實例作文來看，16分以上的作文，沒有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。當(dāng)然，也極少有超過100字的，因為中考試卷的短線格一共80個，在格子下面大約還有2行的空間，可以加20字左右，再多閱卷人就很難看清了，也會影響卷面的美觀。所以，同學(xué)們?nèi)绻�想讓作文得到高分，最好是讓字�(jǐn)?shù)在75-100字之間。

　　3. 語法和拼寫錯誤：每個扣0.5，重復(fù)錯誤不計;

　　4. 標(biāo)點錯誤：每4個扣0.5.

　　二：加分點

　　除了這些扣分點，還有一些得分點：比如說作文的**結(jié)構(gòu)分，就是根據(jù)學(xué)生使用復(fù)雜句型、單詞和諺語、俗語的情況來加分。

　　只要文章中有1個亮點，基本就可以爭取到1分(3分的文采分是很難全部拿到的)。而這1分的亮點，是可以提前準(zhǔn)備的。例如，有一些“萬金油”式的復(fù)雜句型，例如強調(diào)句型、only相關(guān)的倒裝句等，只要同學(xué)們多操練幾次，幾乎是一定能用到作文當(dāng)中，從而為自己爭取到這1分。

　　其次就是卷面分

　　很多家長和同學(xué)，尤其是部分書法并不是十分整潔的同學(xué)，都會關(guān)心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。雖然在閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)里面并沒有卷面分這一項，但是這個分?jǐn)?shù)卻真切地反映在了同學(xué)們的分?jǐn)?shù)里面。

　　據(jù)閱卷老師的經(jīng)驗，在閱卷的時候并不是按這3個部分逐項打分的，而是在第一遍讀完全文之后，心里已經(jīng)形成了一個“印象分”，然后再細(xì)讀第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各個打分部分。因此，這個“印象分”就非常重要，而同學(xué)們的書法，也正是在這個環(huán)節(jié)，影響到了自己的分?jǐn)?shù)。所以初三的考生，如果書法不好，一定要注意。所謂的書法并不需要寫的很漂亮，符合3個簡單的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)即可：沒有斜體、沒有連筆、涂改較少。

英語分析作文6

　　俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達(dá)能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從*時的課堂學(xué)習(xí)一點一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應(yīng)是一個**體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)名詞不變復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)不加s，前后不一致，以及時態(tài)語態(tài)、句子完整性等方面的錯誤。

　　1.審題不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評分原則，若文章內(nèi)容不切題，則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確，都會被判為零分。

　　2.拼寫錯誤

　　拼寫是考生應(yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá)，通常會降低作文的檔次。

　　3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題

　　誤：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少動詞

　　在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有動詞來構(gòu)成，如：“我累了�！边@個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。

　　誤：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　誤：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

　　還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同，也會出現(xiàn)明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現(xiàn)象。

　　誤：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代詞的誤用

　　英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯誤。

　　誤：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因為對句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識模糊，所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　誤：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能**構(gòu)成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所謂不一致，包括數(shù)的不一致、時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has;同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

　　改為when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯誤

　　漢語動詞無時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關(guān)重要。例：

　　誤：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.綜合性錯誤

　　綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生*時知識的積累，所以考生應(yīng)該從*時練習(xí)出發(fā)，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水*的原版著作，提高自己的.英語素養(yǎng)。

英語分析作文7

　　俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達(dá)能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從*時的課堂學(xué)習(xí)一點一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應(yīng)是一個**體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)名詞不變復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)不加s，前后不一致，以及時態(tài)語態(tài)、句子完整性等方面的錯誤。

　　1.審題不清

my winter holiday 英語作文

　　如20xx年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評分原則，若文章內(nèi)容不切題，則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確，都會被判為零分。

　　2.拼寫錯誤

　　拼寫是考生應(yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá)，通常會降低作文的檔次。

　　3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題

　　誤：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少動詞

　　在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有動詞來構(gòu)成，如：“我累了�！边@個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。

　　誤：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　誤：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

　　還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同，也會出現(xiàn)明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現(xiàn)象。

　　誤：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代詞的誤用

　　英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯誤。

　　誤：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因為對句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識模糊，所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　誤：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能**構(gòu)成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所謂不一致，包括數(shù)的不一致、時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has;同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

　　改為when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯誤

　　漢語動詞無時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關(guān)重要。例：

　　誤：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.綜合性錯誤

　　綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的.混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生*時知識的積累，所以考生應(yīng)該從*時練習(xí)出發(fā)，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水*的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養(yǎng)。

英語分析作文8

　　一、指代方面的錯誤

　　在使用代詞it，he，this，that，which，one等時，前文中應(yīng)出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，這句話中，him和it這兩個代詞都有明確的先行詞，分別是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含義非常清楚。

　　可是，不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時，雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么，但在作文中卻沒有交代清楚，結(jié)果這些代詞非但沒有使行文簡潔，反而造成了意思上的模糊，讓閱卷老師不知所云。

　　誤：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【說明】句1中的they既可指教師，也可指學(xué)生，屬指代不清的`。可以把它們中的任意一個改成單數(shù)名詞。因為單數(shù)名詞也可以泛指一類。

　　二、修飾方面的錯誤

　　修飾語應(yīng)緊靠被修飾的成分，并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語的位置不妥當(dāng)，就會造出模棱兩可的病句。

　　誤：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【說明】句1要表達(dá)的是把有害氣體排放到農(nóng)村，還是把工廠遷到農(nóng)村去?顯然修飾語to the countryside的位置放錯了。如句2改變一下結(jié)構(gòu)，就能清楚地表達(dá)要表達(dá)的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的錯誤

　　在一個句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個句子之間，要保持時態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)等的一致。

　　誤：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【說明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯誤

　　這里專指語態(tài)、比較級、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時態(tài)等錯誤。

　　1、誤：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　誤：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　誤：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　誤：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【說明】happen，take place，occur，arise等動詞和動詞詞組一般既不能用作被動結(jié)構(gòu)，也不能作為及物動詞帶賓語的。但學(xué)生作文中類似的錯誤較多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、誤：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　誤：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　誤：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【說明】這些都是在使用比較形式時出現(xiàn)的錯誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、斷句方面的錯誤

　　一句句子沒有結(jié)束，又開始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。

　　誤：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【說明】以because，since，if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能**成句的，只能依屬于主句，所以不能寫成另一句。

　　六、連詞方面的錯誤

　　作文中缺少必要的連詞，或錯用連詞的現(xiàn)象也比較普遍。

　　誤：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【說明】學(xué)生在寫作中往往意識不到連詞的重要，不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來明確標(biāo)示出因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。

　　七、搭配方面的錯誤

　　學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級作文閱卷中，近千篇作文在表達(dá)上海交通越來越擁擠這個意思時，幾乎沒有一篇用 heavier，大多數(shù)人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。

　　1、誤：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【說明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能與fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以這樣說A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、誤：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【說明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能與expensive，cheap搭配，但可以說In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可見，要提高對詞語搭配的駕馭能力，除了要在*時的閱讀過程中多積累，還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價格貴、學(xué)習(xí)知識、人減少等搭配的影響，避免寫出look book或see book這樣的笑話來。

　　八、誤用方面

　　學(xué)生作文中對詞語的誤用也相當(dāng)普遍，誤用詞語不僅不能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)作者的意思，而且也會鬧出笑話。

　　1、誤：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、誤：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【說明】以上錯句都是因為對形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的，工業(yè)上的應(yīng)為industrial。effect一般用作名詞，其動詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實現(xiàn)，而這里的意思是影響，應(yīng)換成affect。

英語分析作文9

　　一、指代方面的錯誤

　　在使用代詞it，he，this，that，which，one等時，前文中應(yīng)出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，這句話中，him和it這兩個代詞都有明確的先行詞，分別是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含義非常清楚。

　　可是，不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時，雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么，但在作文中卻沒有交代清楚，結(jié)果這些代詞非但沒有使行文簡潔，反而造成了意思上的模糊，讓閱卷老師不知所云。

　　誤：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【說明】句1中的they既可指教師，也可指學(xué)生，屬指代不清的�？梢园阉鼈冎械娜我庖粋�改成單數(shù)名詞。因為單數(shù)名詞也可以泛指一類。

　　二、修飾方面的錯誤

　　修飾語應(yīng)緊靠被修飾的成分，并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語的位置不妥當(dāng)，就會造出模棱兩可的病句。

　　誤：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【說明】句1要表達(dá)的是把有害氣體排放到農(nóng)村，還是把工廠遷到農(nóng)村去?顯然修飾語to the countryside的'位置放錯了。如句2改變一下結(jié)構(gòu)，就能清楚地表達(dá)要表達(dá)的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的錯誤

　　在一個句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個句子之間，要保持時態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)等的一致。

　　誤：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【說明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯誤

　　這里專指語態(tài)、比較級、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時態(tài)等錯誤。

　　1、誤：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　誤：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　誤：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　誤：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【說明】happen，take place，occur，arise等動詞和動詞詞組一般既不能用作被動結(jié)構(gòu)，也不能作為及物動詞帶賓語的。但學(xué)生作文中類似的錯誤較多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、誤：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　誤：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　誤：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【說明】這些都是在使用比較形式時出現(xiàn)的錯誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、斷句方面的錯誤

　　一句句子沒有結(jié)束，又開始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。

　　誤：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【說明】以because，since，if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能**成句的，只能依屬于主句，所以不能寫成另一句。

　　六、連詞方面的錯誤

　　作文中缺少必要的連詞，或錯用連詞的現(xiàn)象也比較普遍。

　　誤：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【說明】學(xué)生在寫作中往往意識不到連詞的重要，不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來明確標(biāo)示出因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。

　　七、搭配方面的錯誤

　　學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級作文閱卷中，近千篇作文在表達(dá)上海交通越來越擁擠這個意思時，幾乎沒有一篇用 heavier，大多數(shù)人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。

　　1、誤：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【說明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能與fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以這樣說A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、誤：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【說明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能與expensive，cheap搭配，但可以說In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可見，要提高對詞語搭配的駕馭能力，除了要在*時的閱讀過程中多積累，還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價格貴、學(xué)習(xí)知識、人減少等搭配的影響，避免寫出look book或see book這樣的笑話來。

　　八、誤用方面

　　學(xué)生作文中對詞語的誤用也相當(dāng)普遍，誤用詞語不僅不能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)作者的意思，而且也會鬧出笑話。

　　1、誤：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、誤：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【說明】以上錯句都是因為對形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的，工業(yè)上的應(yīng)為industrial。effect一般用作名詞，其動詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實現(xiàn)，而這里的意思是影響，應(yīng)換成affect。

英語分析作文10

　　⑴話題關(guān)注度

　　考研英語作文通常并非最熱點，因為最熱點也最容易被押中，對考生來說具有投機取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的測試出考生的水*;此外，考題被押中也是命題的失敗。所以一般來說考研寫作的話題會是當(dāng)年的次重點，可能和最熱點有關(guān)系，也可能沒有關(guān)系。

　　⑵寫作前身

　　英語二是從20xx年開始設(shè)置的一門考試科目，但事實上它的歷史并非如此短暫，它的前身是MBA，一提到這個很多人，尤其是學(xué)經(jīng)濟的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多練練手，就把MBA的真題找出來做，但事實上MBA的真題并不需要做，因為事物的發(fā)展是一個逐漸成熟，逐漸發(fā)展壯大的過程，早些年的MBA的考題太過簡單，不過建議大家，可以練習(xí)下MBA試卷的寫作部分。

　　⑶圖表作文考什么?

　　眾所周知，英語二的寫作就是以圖表作文的形式出現(xiàn)，那圖表作文側(cè)重于考查什么內(nèi)容呢?在英語老師看來，大綱要求上表明了主要考察考生觀察數(shù)據(jù)的能力。但在分析的時候，只抓住最有特點的數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分析就行，面面俱到就沒有意義了。

　�、葓D表難易度

　　我們都知道，英語二考查的圖表主要分為四類：柱狀圖、餅狀圖、線形圖和表格圖。其中，又以表格圖為最難，餅狀圖最為簡單，而柱狀圖的寫作方法和線形圖較為類似。

　　⑸段落安排

　　英語二的大作文都是essay，所謂的“essay”，不是散文，也不是隨筆，而是短議論文。一般將其分成三段，而且遵循議論文的寫作風(fēng)格，按照提出問題、分析問題和解決問題的思路去行文就可以了。

　�、试~匯

　　很多人覺得詞匯就是在閱讀部分的啊，只有認(rèn)識單詞就能看懂閱讀，會做題了。寫作部分也需要記單詞嗎?對于這個問題，考研英語老師的.回答是肯定的。因為如果你不會寫這個單詞，又何談遣詞造句呢?所以，在日常的學(xué)習(xí)備考中，將寫作中所會用到的單詞都記住并掌握，不僅是重要的，而且是必須的。