my holiday英語作文1

　　We are going to have the winter holiday.During the holiday we will have the Spring Festival.So all of the families in China are having a busy time.All of the children in China like Spring Festival very much,because they can eat many delicious food and get many money.But children in China have to do the homework for Winter Holiday.So that the could remember what they have learn the year before.Each of the children likes Winter Holiday.

　　I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.

　　I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. Then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!

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——my,dream大學(xué)英語滿分作文5篇

my,dream大學(xué)英語滿分作文1

　　Everyone has their own dreamsSo do I.An old saying:Great dreams make great man.It is very important to dreamSo hold on to your dreams;One day they may just come ture.You must believe:Where there is a willthere is a way.

　　My dream is to be an expert in English.You may ask:Why can like this?I will tell you:In factI have a lot of reasons.

　　FirstBecause English is an international language now.It is widely used in the world.Just the study of English makes life so colorful.English is taught throughout the world.So we must learn English.

　　NextBecause we need a common language to communicate.This kind of language is English.I would like to walk out of Chinainto the world.I love my motherlandChinaI will let her become more prosperous and powerful.

　　FinallyBecause I am going to promate Chinese culture everywhere.I am going to teach Chinese all over the world.I can undoubtedlly change the world for the better!

　　I do not give up my dream no matter what happens.Nothing is difficult in the world if you put your heart into it.I feel strongly that I can make it.Let us make miracles together!

my,dream大學(xué)英語滿分作文2

　　Dream, avers, countless people in compiling the dream of frustrations. At night, when the dark dream of fire happens, bring people farther and nearly hope suddenly. It floats in the imagination and expect, is the people heart longing.

　　In reality, under the impact of dreams just peace of mind, make life more than a light. Established in persistent dream forever, sweat, and tears, overlooking efforts over the past: the great Madame Curie to benefit human, hard struggle for life, and finally produced a pure radium. Her life though because long-term accept radioactive substances stimulation and gone, but she dreamers never stop footstep. She used her dream, write down the eternal life.

　　But we, because many obstacles and stopped because of laziness, or heart and give up the dream. Don't flashy longing dream will come true, also don't immersed in a busy and noisy. Choose the right way, so you must go, no matter how long the road ahead, regardless of whether, as long as have danger "and a" belief, came to the joy of dreams, is far away from you will also?

　　The dream is flower seeds, the eagle's dream is ready to fly. "Li-an old hero, costraint", even a nag are able to support the weak body dream. So, whether we should be more young take advantage of this wonderful time chasing the dream trace?

　　Dream, it is like the butterfly wings, with beautiful we capture it, But it is more like a fragrance pubi fragrance, we find it, temptation to catch a refreshing "to". Also no wonder that someone will give up the pursuit of dreams, because "the real dream too is". Don't dream really so hard to reach? No, because those who are too greed, will put the dream with high places, all day but never considered himself ever reach the dream. When it is discovered, he is already dispirited and discouraged, no interest in exploring the dream again.

　　Dream really so far? In fact, it might be far ahead, are you looking forward to your hand, eagerly. Or, it in the corner, prepare crossroads in unexpected jumped out when you scare you jump, give you a surprise. It may be illusory dreams, perhaps is immensely. The life forever, because dream and flash.

　　In the streets to see the girl singing a song, sweet singing on stage, this should now, but in the eyes of silent singing. Oh, don't disturb her, don't think she is poor, you know, she is in order to realize her dream and playing well. In the persistent efforts, sweat, and tears filled with turn your heart, your dreams will release its.

my,dream大學(xué)英語滿分作文3

　　I want to be an inventor in the future. I want to invent new things such as AI robots, new energy cars and electronics ,etc. For example, I will make a new energy car, because there is too much pollution. It can make use of wastes as energy and when there is a traffic jam ,it can fly in sky and drive into water ,it can be faster, more comfortable and convenient . I want to make the world better, I'll follow my dream.

my,dream大學(xué)英語滿分作文4

　　when i was a naughty boy, may be because of the influence of the film."iao bing zhang ga",my dream was to be a soldier just like zhang ga. i thought if i was a soldier, i should be able to swim, pe and climb trees as he did. it seemed to be very wonderful. so i began to learn swimming, ping and climbing trees. i practiced every day and finally i could do them well. but when i entered junior high school and had the military training. i suddenly found that being a soldier was very difficult and i wasn＇t strong enough to bear it . i had to give my dream up.

　　but i wasn＇t discouraged, and i had new aim, which was to be a postman, or rather to be a newspaper boy. as a newspaper boy. i could speed along streets on a bike and throw newspapers onto every porch. that＇s also very cool. so i started learning to ride a bicycle. after the everyday practice, i could go very fast by bicycle. but to my disappointment, the job which i wanted only eisted in western counties not in china, because there was no porch in china. and chinese postmen had to stuff very thick newspapers into very small mailboes from very narrow entrances. the job was far from what i had epected. so once again my dream fell through.

　　perhaps you have had the same eperience as i and most of your dreams haven＇t come true yet. but i think it doesn＇t matter, because if you have a dream, you＇ll make many efforts to realize it. this course is really important. if i hadn＇t dreamt of being a soldier or a newspaper boy. i wouldn＇t have learned to swim, to pe, to climb trees or to ride a bicycle. even if our dream can＇t come true, you＇ll learn much from the efforts you have made. so what i want to tell us is that dream helps us to grow up and teaches us how to control our lives . it is dream that gives us power and makes our lives colorful

my,dream大學(xué)英語滿分作文5

　　When I was small, because often sick, and often go to see a doctor. Every time a doctor my disease good, I think the doctor is like a magician, very strong, very magical, I dream I can be a doctor when he grows up.

　　Didn't go to school before I like and grandpa play the game of doctors and patients. Grandpa and I are so play, pretend grandpa is sick, come to me to see a doctor, I took a toy stethoscope help grandpa hear here, listen to there, although I don't know should listen to what position, but I listened very carefully, and then I find a piece of paper as records, drawing on the paper, wildly seriously say: "the patient, you have the cold, need an injection." Then I took the toy needle and cotton buds, alcohol to disinfect with a bowl of water, I solemnly to help grandpa disinfection, give or take an injection, and prescribed some medicine, and finally told him: "the patient, must take medicine on time, drink more boiled water, so your condition will soon be ok."

　　Gradually I grow up, I know grandpa and grandma already have diabetes, high blood pressure, my grandma body is not good, there are frequent dizziness, vertigo once grandmother also fell handles all hurt, they are my most close relatives, I don't want they get sick, I hope they healthy, so I more determined to grow up to be a doctor, because the doctor can make sick people rehabilitation, let people away from pain.

　　This is what I always dream of.

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——holiday英語作文5篇

holiday英語作文1

　　Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!

　　The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus.

　　Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious.

　　My mouth is now watering again. I will never forget such interesting expirence.

holiday英語作文2

　　Hello! My name is Zhu Hao. I like summer holiday very much.

　　Summer holiday is a long holiday. There are two months. So I can do a lot of things I like. I can go swimming, go for a travel, play with my friends and so on. Last summer holiday, I went to America. I enjoyed the beautiful world under the sea of Hawaii in a U-boat. In the sea, I saw a lot of beautiful fishes, the fishes have beautiful colours, such as red, yellow, blue…… But when I in the deep sea, I surprised that I can’t see red! That’s interesting. After a long time, we went back to the ground. We all had a wonderful time.

　　Do you envy me? Ha ha!

holiday英語作文3

　　Summer holiday is coming . I will travel to Hang zhou with my friends . we will go to Hang zhou is graffiti wall painting. I will go to the playground in Hang zhou.

　　Because i heard that the people of the wheel will be very happy. I hope that wu have a smooth journey. Have a good time ! If you want to travel with us, you can contact me before 20.

holiday英語作文4

　　Summer Holiday

　　Our summer holiday is coming. How exciting! It will last for two months. What shall I do in my summer holiday? Let me tell you.

　　In the morning, I get up at 7:00, and read some books in the yard. Then I have breakfast with my family. After breakfast, I help my father with the farm work. I look after the cow when it eats grass in the fields. It’s very hot, but I’m happy.

　　In the afternoon, I do my homework at home. Sometimes I help my mother cook supper. After supper, I watch TV. I like to watch cartoons. It’s very interesting.

　　I go to bed early, because I’ll get up early the next day.

holiday英語作文5

　　Now, the summer holiday is coming to the end. I really spend a rich but happy holiday. As a junior student, I am not totally free in the summer holiday, because study is still an important part in my life.

　　In the first month of the holiday, I study at home to finish my homework. There are many tasks I have to finish. Besides, I have to go to the English and mathtraining class, because I am weak inthe two subjects. Therefore, I need some extra training. After that, I visit to my father with my mother. My father works in other province and I have not seen him for half a year.

　　My mother and I miss him very much. We spend near a month with him.When my father is free, he often takes us go out. We are happy together.

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——My英語作文5篇

My英語作文1

　　I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?

　　我的狗

　　我有一只狗。我的狗名叫杜都。都都是9年。都都是脂肪。它穿著一件白大褂。嘟嘟有兩只大眼睛和兩只小耳朵。它有一個(gè)簡短的'嘴巴。我的狗很聰明。我喜歡我的狗。你喜歡它嗎?

My英語作文2

　　Everybody has a wish, but thry're all different. me, too, also have a wish. what is my wish, do you want to know? my wish is , i have that wish because . my wish might not be something that's great, but it's my wish. it's very important to me, no what have happened.

My英語作文3

　　今天的天氣雖然不怎么好，可是我的心情是陽光明媚的，因?yàn)樽蛱煳覍懥艘黄�作文發(fā)表到優(yōu)秀作文網(wǎng)**，這是大家對(duì)我的認(rèn)可和鼓勵(lì)，寫作的道路上我才剛剛起步，雖然前方的路還很漫長，但是我相信有了我向老師虛心實(shí)意的求教，媽媽不辭辛勞的輔導(dǎo)以及我自己的不懈努力，我一定會(huì)越走越好，越走越遠(yuǎn)的。

　　Today's weather is not so good, but my mood is sunny, because yesterday I wrote a composition and published it on the excellent composition website, which is everyone's recognition and encouragement for me. I just started on the road of writing, although the road ahead is still very long, but I believe that with my modest and practical advice from the teacher, my mother's painstaking guidance and my own My unremitting efforts, I will go better and further.

　　今天的我很快樂，雖然我并沒有得到什么，但我感覺自己也能做一些事情了。

　　Today I am very happy, although I did not get anything, but I feel that I can do something.

My英語作文4

　　In ten years,I think the I‘ll be a reporter.I‘ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it‘s really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I‘ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don‘t like living alone.

　　I‘ll have pets.I can‘t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I‘ll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I‘ll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I‘ll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.

　　On the weekends, I‘ll be able to dress more casually. I think I‘ll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.

My英語作文5

　　Ten years later, I write to you for the first time, my mood is unable to use my poor language to express, is very complex, some excitement, are looking forward to, and some fear.

　　I have a lot of question want to ask you, there are many many words can express... .

　　After ten years of I, how are you now? Happiness? Do you still insist on ten years ago that become a cartoonist, a novelist's dream? This dream realized after ten years?

　　Or have forgotten it? Just have a simple job, live a flatly light day?

　　Where more will not be dropped off in the exam, not on the university and was wondering how is good looking for work, lived a poor dog's life?

　　My parents are ok? You have to let them live a good life, healthy? They also like ten years ago young and tall? Or is the white-haired?

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——英語holiday是什么中文意思3篇

英語holiday是什么中文意思1

　　1. As the holiday season approaches, new economic indicators show a business activity firming up and rising consumer confidence and spending.

　　2. Uplifting movies dominated the Top 10 for the holiday weekend, a busy period at turnstiles.

　　3. These suburbs are often very busy during the holiday period when throngs of holiday makers from the cities descend on the beach.

　　4. Especially during the busy holiday season, many unemployed professionals are working at temporary jobs in stores and other seasonal businesses.

　　5. Rescue teams around the capital had a busy holiday season responding to calls for help.

　　6. While the'Skinny Genes'singer is very busy with her work, she is relishing the chance to finally take a holiday over the festive season.

　　7. According to a recent survey from the National Retail Federation, some 62 percent of women plan to buy clothing or clothing accessories this holiday season.

　　8. In addition to buying at home, a large number of consumers also thronged Hong Kong for holiday shopping sprees here.

英語holiday是什么中文意思2

　　spend or take a vacation

　　leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure

　　a day on which work is suspended by law or custom

英語holiday是什么中文意思3

　　holidayn.假日,節(jié)日,假期 v.【英】(=vocation【美】)休假,外出度假

　　half holidayn. 半日休假

　　holiday maker度假者

my holiday英語作文10篇（擴(kuò)展5）

——On Happiness英語作文10篇

On Happiness英語作文1

　　Someone asks me what on earth happiness means? I can't give you the exact definition of it, but I'm sure if you love and help others, you'll get it.

　　I'll never forget an old lady. She lives in a small house alone. It's said that her husband and her son died in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often helps others with a smile. Whenever it snows, she is always the first to clean the paths. She looks after several children living nearby. I am one of them. I often remember the stories she told us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is unlucky, but I think she is a happy person. Her life is full of laughter and love.

　　But I'm sad to see some people getting their happiness in bad ways. They speak loudly in cinemas and meeting rooms; they destroy trees to enjoy themselves and they laugh at others' shortcomings. Perhaps they feel happy at that time, but they will never get true happiness because they have lost their personality.

　　Now I know what happiness is. It means kindness, love and unselfishness. Above all, only bringing happiness to others can make you yourself get it.

On Happiness英語作文2

　　Happiness means different things to different people. for example, some students believe that if they have much money or a large number of possessions, they will be happy. they believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have money. some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like. many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.

　　In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can have everything. i don’t agree with the above points. we can’t buy many important things with money, such as health, happiness and knowledge. i value knowledge, which makes me happy, for i can do much for mankind with knowledge. although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.

On Happiness英語作文3

　　Everyone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it “Happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy.

　　Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her“Dressy Mum”. My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname“Small Head Father”. I am fat and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname“Big Head Girl”. I study hard. I am a good student.

　　We are happy every day!

On Happiness英語作文4

　　In this long journey we call life, everybody is in pursuit of happiness and has their own interpretation of happiness. An inspiring idea is that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them, which reveals the very truth about happiness. It cannot be achieved through waiting, but only through striving.

　　There is no way that life always progresses as we wish. Problems may occur and we find ourselves in trouble, but it doesnt mean we are deprived of happiness. There are numerous examples for us to follow: disabled people overcoming obstacles, patients fighting against disease, poverty-stricken people achieving their dreams -- all these inspiring heroes. Their lives are definitely not problem-free, but they have found happiness by courageously solving problems.

On Happiness英語作文5

　　Everyone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it “Happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy.

　　Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her“Dressy Mum”. My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname“Small Head Father”. I am fat and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname“Big Head Girl”. I study hard. I am a good student.

　　We are happy every day!

　　每個(gè)人都有家，我也有一個(gè)家庭。我將其命名為“幸福的家庭”，因?yàn)榧依锩總�(gè)人都很幸福。

　　來認(rèn)識(shí)一下我的家人吧!我的媽媽非常友善，我愛她，她也愛我。媽媽非常漂亮，她喜歡漂亮的衣服，我常常叫她“考究媽媽”。我的父親是一個(gè)老板，他又高又瘦，有個(gè)小腦袋，我給了他一個(gè)綽號(hào)“小頭爸爸”。我又胖又可愛，我的頭很大，我給自己一個(gè)綽號(hào)“大頭女孩”。我努力學(xué)習(xí)，是個(gè)好學(xué)生。

　　我們每天都很快樂!

On Happiness英語作文6

　　Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy. Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness. I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulate them, I feel happy, too. When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.

On Happiness英語作文7

　　Last night, I read the news about a professor who wrote the paper 20 years ago.

　　He did some research about asking people whether they were happy and he came up with the conclusion that happiness belonged to two kinds of people, they are the one who lived in peace and the other was who lived with great achievement.

　　But 20 years later, he decided to revisit these people and he found that the conclusion about happiness he made before was wrong. Most people with great achievement felt not happy because they met setbacks.

　　The professor came up with the new conclusion that the real happiness lies in the peaceful soul. This is the code of happiness.

　　昨晚，我閱讀了一則**關(guān)于一位教授20年前寫的一篇論文。他做了一些**，詢問人們是否感到幸福，然后他得出結(jié)論，幸福屬于兩類人，那就是趨于*淡的人和取得非凡成就的人。但是20年以后，他決定重新去拜訪那些人，他發(fā)現(xiàn)他以前對(duì)幸福的結(jié)論是錯(cuò)的。大部有著非凡成就的人并不感到開心，因?yàn)樗麄冊(cè)庥隽舜蟠煺�。這位教授得出新的結(jié)論，真正的幸福在于心靈上的*靜。這就是幸福的密碼。

On Happiness英語作文8

　　How to Enhance Our Sense of Happiness?

　　Along with the improvement of living standards，people are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately.They are more concerned about how to enhance their sense of happiness.

　　To a large extent，happiness depends on inpiduals’understanding about it.For some people，happiness relies on material basis.without which they can’t live comfortably and decently.For others，they believe that happiness has nothing to do with money.Thus to enhance the sense of happiness is not equal to improving one’s material living standards.Instead，people are supposed to confront their life with right attitude，to be active and grateful in order to have a happy life.

　　For my part，money does buy happiness.but only up to the point where it enables one to live comfortably.To boost one’s sense of happiness not only needs the material but also the spiritual enrichment. It encompasses living a meaningful life，utilizing your gifts and your time，living with reflection and objective.

On Happiness英語作文9

　　happiness means different things to different people. for example, some people believe that if they have lots of money, they will be happy. they believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness. on the other hand, some people believe that holding a high position in the government is happiness. in this way, you have not onlymoney, but also many other things which can＇t be bought by money. however, other people believe that having lots of money is not happiness nor is holding a high position in the government. these people value their beliefs, or their intelligence, or their health. they think these can make them happy. for me, happiness is closely tied to my studies, my work and my family. when i made great progress in my studies, when i made contributions to the society through my work, when all the members in my family live in harmony, sharing good and sad times, i was happy. although the definition of happiness depends on each inpidual my "wealth" of happiness is in my studies, my work, and my family.

On Happiness英語作文10

　　Happiness is them most precious thing in life.Without it,a man will feel that his ill fate has taken charge of (支配) him and the world is utterly(完全地) dark and dreadful(可怕的).

　　On that account，his body grows weaker,his work slackens(變松弛),and above all,he thinks he would rather die than live.”

　　How to be happy, then?”you may ask.Now,this is the very puzzle that we are going to solve.First,do things in accordance with your conscience(良心);that is,do to others,as you would have other do to you.Secondly,pay more attention to your health,which is the root of success,for a sound constitution(體質(zhì)) enables you to succeed.Thirdly,worry and sorrow are of no use at all!

　　In case you meet with some hard situation, you must try to overcome it without any hesitation(猶豫.Willpower(意志力) is essential(不可缺的) to happiness.And the last,but not the least, adopt(采取) an optimistic attitude toward life,for the world is still in making and you can have a share in it.In this way,true happiness can be obtained.

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——英語分析作文10篇

英語分析作文1

　　1.描述圖畫

　　圖畫作文對(duì)圖畫的描述應(yīng)在第一段進(jìn)行，且最好在首句即開始。此類作文大部分是一幅圖，也會(huì)有兩幅圖出現(xiàn)的情況。如果出現(xiàn)兩幅圖，則很有可能是突顯對(duì)比的情況。

　　圖畫上可能沒有任何文字，也可能在上面出現(xiàn)了一句話，也可以單個(gè)人物說話或兩個(gè)人物對(duì)話，也可能在圖畫外寫了總結(jié)性的一句話。大家注意，這一句話或兩句話一般是非常重要的，應(yīng)予譯出。

　　一般說來，對(duì)圖畫的描寫不必過長，應(yīng)以簡練、準(zhǔn)確為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

　　2.圖畫類作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　我們想象中的最典型最理想的圖畫題提綱應(yīng)該是下面這樣：

　　1. 描述圖畫

　　2. 推導(dǎo)繪畫者的意圖

　　3. 做出評(píng)論

　　對(duì)于這一提綱我們來做具體分析，其中第三點(diǎn)更要細(xì)致研究。首先由圖畫引出一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象或社會(huì)問題，可以是好的，也可以是不好的。在推導(dǎo)繪畫者的意圖時(shí)多是展開說此現(xiàn)象或問題的表現(xiàn)，以證明其引人注目。還有一種可能性是說此現(xiàn)象或問題產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱可直接列出，或還用上述提綱。這時(shí)可把簡單意圖推導(dǎo)直接放到第一段描述圖畫之后，而在第二段中說原因。

　　第三段做出評(píng)論，有可能只是簡單評(píng)論、深化主題就結(jié)束，但這種可能性越來越小了。這一部分很可能說的是辦法，不好的事情就是如何解決的辦法，好的事情就是如何進(jìn)一步發(fā)展的方法。

　　通過上述列表，我們可以看出，多年以來，真實(shí)的提綱是怎樣一步步地向我們想象中的理想模式靠近的。對(duì)于提綱里面出現(xiàn)的變化和規(guī)律，我們來分析一下。

　　我們仔細(xì)分析，會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)歷年考研真題基本上都呈現(xiàn)"現(xiàn)象或問題--原因解釋--解決辦法"這樣的模式，但變化非常多。因?yàn)槲覀冋務(wù)摰募瓤梢允且患�值得弘揚(yáng)的好事，也可能是一個(gè)令人憂心忡忡的社會(huì)問題;針對(duì)后者我們極有可能需要提出做法;而對(duì)于前者，可能解釋一下就結(jié)束了，也可能要寫出相應(yīng)的做法。

　　綜上所述，可以看出，比起圖表作文來，圖畫作文要更靈活，更富于變化。我們一定要多練習(xí)，以達(dá)到一看到圖畫(含圖中和圖邊文字)和提綱(有時(shí)有文章標(biāo)題)就能有效地審題解題，構(gòu)造出合理的具體段落的目的。

　　這里面還有個(gè)問題，就是舉例子，**來已明確出現(xiàn)了兩次，這一點(diǎn)大家一定要多練習(xí)。

英語分析作文2

　　俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達(dá)能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從*時(shí)的課堂學(xué)習(xí)一點(diǎn)一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應(yīng)是一個(gè)**體，任何一方面的欠缺都會(huì)直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實(shí)而經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)名詞不變復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)不加s，前后不一致，以及時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)、句子完整性等方面的錯(cuò)誤。

　　1.審題不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求寫一項(xiàng)最喜歡的課外活動(dòng)，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動(dòng)”，偏離了“一項(xiàng)、課外活動(dòng)”這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評(píng)分原則，若文章內(nèi)容不切題，則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確，都會(huì)被判為零分。

　　2.拼寫錯(cuò)誤

　　拼寫是考生應(yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯(cuò)誤。有拼寫錯(cuò)誤的作文肯定會(huì)被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯(cuò)誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差，同時(shí)也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá)，通常會(huì)降低作文的檔次。

　　3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題

　　誤：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少動(dòng)詞

　　在漢語中沒有動(dòng)詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個(gè)完整的句子都必須有動(dòng)詞來構(gòu)成，如：“我累了。”這個(gè)句子沒有動(dòng)詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。

　　誤：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　誤：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

　　還有一些考生因?yàn)闆]有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同，也會(huì)出現(xiàn)明顯的錯(cuò)誤，造成丟分現(xiàn)象。

　　誤：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代詞的誤用

　　英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時(shí)候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯(cuò)誤。

　　誤：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因?yàn)閷?duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識(shí)模糊，所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　誤：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(這段文章的第二句話沒有動(dòng)詞，他不能**構(gòu)成一個(gè)句子。這是一個(gè)非常常見的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所謂不一致，包括數(shù)的'不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知識(shí)，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has;同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

　　改為when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯(cuò)誤

　　漢語動(dòng)詞無時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化，而對(duì)英語來說，這些都至關(guān)重要。例：

　　誤：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.綜合性錯(cuò)誤

　　綜合性錯(cuò)誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的錯(cuò)誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生*時(shí)知識(shí)的積累，所以考生應(yīng)該從*時(shí)練習(xí)出發(fā)，每天堅(jiān)持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水*的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養(yǎng)。

英語分析作文3

　　一、指代方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　在使用代詞it，he，this，that，which，one等時(shí)，前文中應(yīng)出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，這句話中，him和it這兩個(gè)代詞都有明確的先行詞，分別是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含義非常清楚。

　　可是，不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時(shí)，雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么，但在作文中卻沒有交代清楚，結(jié)果這些代詞非但沒有使行文簡潔，反而造成了意思上的模糊，讓閱卷老師不知所云。

　　誤：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【說明】句1中的they既可指教師，也可指學(xué)生，屬指代不清的�？梢园阉鼈冎械娜我庖粋�(gè)改成單數(shù)名詞。因?yàn)閱螖?shù)名詞也可以泛指一類。

　　二、修飾方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　修飾語應(yīng)緊靠被修飾的成分，并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語的位置不妥當(dāng)，就會(huì)造出模棱兩可的病句。

　　誤：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【說明】句1要表達(dá)的是把有害氣體排放到農(nóng)村，還是把工廠遷到農(nóng)村去?顯然修飾語to the countryside的位置放錯(cuò)了。如句2改變一下結(jié)構(gòu)，就能清楚地表達(dá)要表達(dá)的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　在一個(gè)句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個(gè)句子之間，要保持時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)等的一致。

　　誤：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【說明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　這里專指語態(tài)、比較級(jí)、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時(shí)態(tài)等錯(cuò)誤。

　　1、誤：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　誤：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　誤：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　誤：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【說明】happen，take place，occur，arise等動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞詞組一般既不能用作被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)，也不能作為及物動(dòng)詞帶賓語的'。但學(xué)生作文中類似的錯(cuò)誤較多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、誤：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　誤：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　誤：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【說明】這些都是在使用比較形式時(shí)出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、斷句方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　一句句子沒有結(jié)束，又開始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。

　　誤：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【說明】以because，since，if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能**成句的，只能依屬于主句，所以不能寫成另一句。

　　六、連詞方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　作文中缺少必要的連詞，或錯(cuò)用連詞的現(xiàn)象也比較普遍。

　　誤：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【說明】學(xué)生在寫作中往往意識(shí)不到連詞的重要，不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來明確標(biāo)示出因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。

　　七、搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級(jí)作文閱卷中，近千篇作文在表達(dá)上海交通越來越擁擠這個(gè)意思時(shí)，幾乎沒有一篇用 heavier，大多數(shù)人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。

　　1、誤：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【說明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能與fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以這樣說A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、誤：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【說明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能與expensive，cheap搭配，但可以說In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可見，要提高對(duì)詞語搭配的駕馭能力，除了要在*時(shí)的閱讀過程中多積累，還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價(jià)格貴、學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、人減少等搭配的影響，避免寫出look book或see book這樣的笑話來。

　　八、誤用方面

　　學(xué)生作文中對(duì)詞語的誤用也相當(dāng)普遍，誤用詞語不僅不能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)作者的意思，而且也會(huì)鬧出笑話。

　　1、誤：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、誤：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【說明】以上錯(cuò)句都是因?yàn)閷?duì)形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的，工業(yè)上的應(yīng)為industrial。effect一般用作名詞，其動(dòng)詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實(shí)現(xiàn)，而這里的意思是影響，應(yīng)換成affect。

英語分析作文4

　　⑴話題關(guān)注度

　　考研英語作文通常并非最熱點(diǎn)，因?yàn)樽顭狳c(diǎn)也最容易被押中，對(duì)考生來說具有投機(jī)取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的測試出考生的水*;此外，考題被押中也是命題的失敗。所以一般來說考研寫作的話題會(huì)是當(dāng)年的次重點(diǎn)，可能和最熱點(diǎn)有關(guān)系，也可能沒有關(guān)系。

　�、茖懽髑吧�

　　英語二是從20xx年開始設(shè)置的一門考試科目，但事實(shí)上它的歷史并非如此短暫，它的前身是MBA，一提到這個(gè)很多人，尤其是學(xué)經(jīng)濟(jì)的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多練練手，就把MBA的真題找出來做，但事實(shí)上MBA的真題并不需要做，因?yàn)槭挛锏陌l(fā)展是一個(gè)逐漸成熟，逐漸發(fā)展壯大的過程，早些年的MBA的考題太過簡單，不過建議大家，可以練習(xí)下MBA試卷的寫作部分。

　�、菆D表作文考什么?

　　眾所周知，英語二的寫作就是以圖表作文的形式出現(xiàn)，那圖表作文側(cè)重于考查什么內(nèi)容呢?在英語老師看來，大綱要求上表明了主要考察考生觀察數(shù)據(jù)的能力。但在分析的'時(shí)候，只抓住最有特點(diǎn)的數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分析就行，面面俱到就沒有意義了。

　�、葓D表難易度

　　我們都知道，英語二考查的圖表主要分為四類：柱狀圖、餅狀圖、線形圖和表格圖。其中，又以表格圖為最難，餅狀圖最為簡單，而柱狀圖的寫作方法和線形圖較為類似。

　　⑸段落安排

　　英語二的大作文都是essay，所謂的“essay”，不是散文，也不是隨筆，而是短議論文。一般將其分成三段，而且遵循議論文的寫作風(fēng)格，按照提出問題、分析問題和解決問題的思路去行文就可以了。

　　⑹詞匯

　　很多人覺得詞匯就是在閱讀部分的啊，只有認(rèn)識(shí)單詞就能看懂閱讀，會(huì)做題了。寫作部分也需要記單詞嗎?對(duì)于這個(gè)問題，考研英語老師的回答是肯定的。因?yàn)槿绻�你不�?huì)寫這個(gè)單詞，又何談遣詞造句呢?所以，在日常的學(xué)習(xí)備考中，將寫作中所會(huì)用到的單詞都記住并掌握，不僅是重要的，而且是必須的。

英語分析作文5

　　為了能更好更全面的做好復(fù)習(xí)和迎考準(zhǔn)備，確保將所涉及的'中考考點(diǎn)全面復(fù)習(xí)到位，讓孩子們充滿信心的步入考場，現(xiàn)特準(zhǔn)備了中考英語作文被扣分的原因。

　　一：先看一下扣分點(diǎn)：

　　1.內(nèi)容方面：要點(diǎn)缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若沒有寫一件具體的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若寫的事情太過于虛幻，沒有實(shí)際內(nèi)容，也會(huì)扣1-2分。

　　2.字?jǐn)?shù)：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

　　中考英語作文要求60字以上，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?從我們拿到的實(shí)例作文來看，16分以上的作文，沒有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。當(dāng)然，也極少有超過100字的，因?yàn)橹锌荚嚲淼亩叹�格一共80個(gè)，在格子下面大約還有2行的空間，可以加20字左右，再多閱卷人就很難看清了，也會(huì)影響卷面的美觀。所以，同學(xué)們?nèi)绻�想讓作文得到高分，最好是讓字�(jǐn)?shù)在75-100字之間。

　　3. 語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤：每個(gè)扣0.5，重復(fù)錯(cuò)誤不計(jì);

　　4. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤：每4個(gè)扣0.5.

　　二：加分點(diǎn)

　　除了這些扣分點(diǎn)，還有一些得分點(diǎn)：比如說作文的**結(jié)構(gòu)分，就是根據(jù)學(xué)生使用復(fù)雜句型、單詞和諺語、俗語的情況來加分。

　　只要文章中有1個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，基本就可以爭取到1分(3分的文采分是很難全部拿到的)。而這1分的亮點(diǎn)，是可以提前準(zhǔn)備的。例如，有一些“萬金油”式的復(fù)雜句型，例如強(qiáng)調(diào)句型、only相關(guān)的倒裝句等，只要同學(xué)們多操練幾次，幾乎是一定能用到作文當(dāng)中，從而為自己爭取到這1分。

　　其次就是卷面分

　　很多家長和同學(xué)，尤其是部分書法并不是十分整潔的同學(xué)，都會(huì)關(guān)心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。雖然在閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)里面并沒有卷面分這一項(xiàng)，但是這個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)卻真切地反映在了同學(xué)們的分?jǐn)?shù)里面。

　　據(jù)閱卷老師的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，在閱卷的時(shí)候并不是按這3個(gè)部分逐項(xiàng)打分的，而是在第一遍讀完全文之后，心里已經(jīng)形成了一個(gè)“印象分”，然后再細(xì)讀第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各個(gè)打分部分。因此，這個(gè)“印象分”就非常重要，而同學(xué)們的書法，也正是在這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)，影響到了自己的分?jǐn)?shù)。所以初三的考生，如果書法不好，一定要注意。所謂的書法并不需要寫的很漂亮，符合3個(gè)簡單的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)即可：沒有斜體、沒有連筆、涂改較少。

英語分析作文6

　　俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達(dá)能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從*時(shí)的課堂學(xué)習(xí)一點(diǎn)一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應(yīng)是一個(gè)**體，任何一方面的欠缺都會(huì)直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實(shí)而經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)名詞不變復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)不加s，前后不一致，以及時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)、句子完整性等方面的錯(cuò)誤。

　　1.審題不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求寫一項(xiàng)最喜歡的課外活動(dòng)，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動(dòng)”，偏離了“一項(xiàng)、課外活動(dòng)”這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評(píng)分原則，若文章內(nèi)容不切題，則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確，都會(huì)被判為零分。

　　2.拼寫錯(cuò)誤

　　拼寫是考生應(yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯(cuò)誤。有拼寫錯(cuò)誤的作文肯定會(huì)被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯(cuò)誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差，同時(shí)也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá)，通常會(huì)降低作文的檔次。

　　3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題

　　誤：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少動(dòng)詞

　　在漢語中沒有動(dòng)詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個(gè)完整的句子都必須有動(dòng)詞來構(gòu)成，如：“我累了。”這個(gè)句子沒有動(dòng)詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。

　　誤：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　誤：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

　　還有一些考生因?yàn)闆]有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同，也會(huì)出現(xiàn)明顯的錯(cuò)誤，造成丟分現(xiàn)象。

　　誤：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代詞的誤用

　　英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時(shí)候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯(cuò)誤。

　　誤：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因?yàn)閷?duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識(shí)模糊，所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　誤：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(這段文章的第二句話沒有動(dòng)詞，他不能**構(gòu)成一個(gè)句子。這是一個(gè)非常常見的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所謂不一致，包括數(shù)的不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知識(shí)，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has;同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

　　改為when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯(cuò)誤

　　漢語動(dòng)詞無時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化，而對(duì)英語來說，這些都至關(guān)重要。例：

　　誤：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.綜合性錯(cuò)誤

　　綜合性錯(cuò)誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的錯(cuò)誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生*時(shí)知識(shí)的積累，所以考生應(yīng)該從*時(shí)練習(xí)出發(fā)，每天堅(jiān)持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水*的原版著作，提高自己的.英語素養(yǎng)。

英語分析作文7

　　俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達(dá)能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從*時(shí)的課堂學(xué)習(xí)一點(diǎn)一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應(yīng)是一個(gè)**體，任何一方面的欠缺都會(huì)直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實(shí)而經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)名詞不變復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)不加s，前后不一致，以及時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)、句子完整性等方面的錯(cuò)誤。

　　1.審題不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求寫一項(xiàng)最喜歡的課外活動(dòng)，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動(dòng)”，偏離了“一項(xiàng)、課外活動(dòng)”這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評(píng)分原則，若文章內(nèi)容不切題，則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確，都會(huì)被判為零分。

　　2.拼寫錯(cuò)誤

　　拼寫是考生應(yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯(cuò)誤。有拼寫錯(cuò)誤的作文肯定會(huì)被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯(cuò)誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差，同時(shí)也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá)，通常會(huì)降低作文的檔次。

　　3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題

　　誤：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少動(dòng)詞

　　在漢語中沒有動(dòng)詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個(gè)完整的句子都必須有動(dòng)詞來構(gòu)成，如：“我累了�！边@個(gè)句子沒有動(dòng)詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。

　　誤：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　誤：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

　　還有一些考生因?yàn)闆]有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同，也會(huì)出現(xiàn)明顯的錯(cuò)誤，造成丟分現(xiàn)象。

　　誤：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代詞的誤用

　　英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時(shí)候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯(cuò)誤。

　　誤：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因?yàn)閷?duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識(shí)模糊，所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　誤：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(這段文章的第二句話沒有動(dòng)詞，他不能**構(gòu)成一個(gè)句子。這是一個(gè)非常常見的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所謂不一致，包括數(shù)的不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知識(shí)，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has;同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

　　改為when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯(cuò)誤

　　漢語動(dòng)詞無時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化，而對(duì)英語來說，這些都至關(guān)重要。例：

　　誤：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.綜合性錯(cuò)誤

　　綜合性錯(cuò)誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的錯(cuò)誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的.混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生*時(shí)知識(shí)的積累，所以考生應(yīng)該從*時(shí)練習(xí)出發(fā)，每天堅(jiān)持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水*的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養(yǎng)。

英語分析作文8

　　一、指代方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　在使用代詞it，he，this，that，which，one等時(shí)，前文中應(yīng)出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，這句話中，him和it這兩個(gè)代詞都有明確的先行詞，分別是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含義非常清楚。

　　可是，不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時(shí)，雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么，但在作文中卻沒有交代清楚，結(jié)果這些代詞非但沒有使行文簡潔，反而造成了意思上的模糊，讓閱卷老師不知所云。

　　誤：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【說明】句1中的they既可指教師，也可指學(xué)生，屬指代不清的`。可以把它們中的任意一個(gè)改成單數(shù)名詞。因?yàn)閱螖?shù)名詞也可以泛指一類。

　　二、修飾方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　修飾語應(yīng)緊靠被修飾的成分，并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語的位置不妥當(dāng)，就會(huì)造出模棱兩可的病句。

　　誤：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【說明】句1要表達(dá)的是把有害氣體排放到農(nóng)村，還是把工廠遷到農(nóng)村去?顯然修飾語to the countryside的位置放錯(cuò)了。如句2改變一下結(jié)構(gòu)，就能清楚地表達(dá)要表達(dá)的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　在一個(gè)句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個(gè)句子之間，要保持時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)等的一致。

　　誤：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【說明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　這里專指語態(tài)、比較級(jí)、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時(shí)態(tài)等錯(cuò)誤。

　　1、誤：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　誤：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　誤：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　誤：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【說明】happen，take place，occur，arise等動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞詞組一般既不能用作被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)，也不能作為及物動(dòng)詞帶賓語的。但學(xué)生作文中類似的錯(cuò)誤較多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、誤：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　誤：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　誤：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【說明】這些都是在使用比較形式時(shí)出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、斷句方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　一句句子沒有結(jié)束，又開始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。

　　誤：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【說明】以because，since，if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能**成句的，只能依屬于主句，所以不能寫成另一句。

　　六、連詞方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　作文中缺少必要的連詞，或錯(cuò)用連詞的現(xiàn)象也比較普遍。

　　誤：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【說明】學(xué)生在寫作中往往意識(shí)不到連詞的重要，不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來明確標(biāo)示出因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。

　　七、搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級(jí)作文閱卷中，近千篇作文在表達(dá)上海交通越來越擁擠這個(gè)意思時(shí)，幾乎沒有一篇用 heavier，大多數(shù)人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。

　　1、誤：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【說明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能與fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以這樣說A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、誤：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【說明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能與expensive，cheap搭配，但可以說In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可見，要提高對(duì)詞語搭配的駕馭能力，除了要在*時(shí)的閱讀過程中多積累，還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價(jià)格貴、學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、人減少等搭配的影響，避免寫出look book或see book這樣的笑話來。

　　八、誤用方面

　　學(xué)生作文中對(duì)詞語的誤用也相當(dāng)普遍，誤用詞語不僅不能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)作者的意思，而且也會(huì)鬧出笑話。

　　1、誤：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、誤：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【說明】以上錯(cuò)句都是因?yàn)閷?duì)形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的，工業(yè)上的應(yīng)為industrial。effect一般用作名詞，其動(dòng)詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實(shí)現(xiàn)，而這里的意思是影響，應(yīng)換成affect。

英語分析作文9

　　一、指代方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　在使用代詞it，he，this，that，which，one等時(shí)，前文中應(yīng)出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，這句話中，him和it這兩個(gè)代詞都有明確的先行詞，分別是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含義非常清楚。

　　可是，不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時(shí)，雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么，但在作文中卻沒有交代清楚，結(jié)果這些代詞非但沒有使行文簡潔，反而造成了意思上的模糊，讓閱卷老師不知所云。

　　誤：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【說明】句1中的they既可指教師，也可指學(xué)生，屬指代不清的�？梢园阉鼈冎械娜我庖粋�(gè)改成單數(shù)名詞。因?yàn)閱螖?shù)名詞也可以泛指一類。

　　二、修飾方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　修飾語應(yīng)緊靠被修飾的成分，并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語的位置不妥當(dāng)，就會(huì)造出模棱兩可的病句。

　　誤：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【說明】句1要表達(dá)的是把有害氣體排放到農(nóng)村，還是把工廠遷到農(nóng)村去?顯然修飾語to the countryside的'位置放錯(cuò)了。如句2改變一下結(jié)構(gòu)，就能清楚地表達(dá)要表達(dá)的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　在一個(gè)句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個(gè)句子之間，要保持時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)等的一致。

　　誤：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【說明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　這里專指語態(tài)、比較級(jí)、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時(shí)態(tài)等錯(cuò)誤。

　　1、誤：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　誤：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　誤：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　誤：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【說明】happen，take place，occur，arise等動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞詞組一般既不能用作被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)，也不能作為及物動(dòng)詞帶賓語的。但學(xué)生作文中類似的錯(cuò)誤較多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、誤：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　誤：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　誤：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【說明】這些都是在使用比較形式時(shí)出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、斷句方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　一句句子沒有結(jié)束，又開始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。

　　誤：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【說明】以because，since，if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能**成句的，只能依屬于主句，所以不能寫成另一句。

　　六、連詞方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　作文中缺少必要的連詞，或錯(cuò)用連詞的現(xiàn)象也比較普遍。

　　誤：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【說明】學(xué)生在寫作中往往意識(shí)不到連詞的重要，不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來明確標(biāo)示出因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。

　　七、搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤

　　學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級(jí)作文閱卷中，近千篇作文在表達(dá)上海交通越來越擁擠這個(gè)意思時(shí)，幾乎沒有一篇用 heavier，大多數(shù)人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。

　　1、誤：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【說明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能與fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以這樣說A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、誤：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【說明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能與expensive，cheap搭配，但可以說In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可見，要提高對(duì)詞語搭配的駕馭能力，除了要在*時(shí)的閱讀過程中多積累，還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價(jià)格貴、學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、人減少等搭配的影響，避免寫出look book或see book這樣的笑話來。

　　八、誤用方面

　　學(xué)生作文中對(duì)詞語的誤用也相當(dāng)普遍，誤用詞語不僅不能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)作者的意思，而且也會(huì)鬧出笑話。

　　1、誤：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、誤：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【說明】以上錯(cuò)句都是因?yàn)閷?duì)形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的，工業(yè)上的應(yīng)為industrial。effect一般用作名詞，其動(dòng)詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實(shí)現(xiàn)，而這里的意思是影響，應(yīng)換成affect。

英語分析作文10

　　⑴話題關(guān)注度

　　考研英語作文通常并非最熱點(diǎn)，因?yàn)樽顭狳c(diǎn)也最容易被押中，對(duì)考生來說具有投機(jī)取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的測試出考生的水*;此外，考題被押中也是命題的失敗。所以一般來說考研寫作的話題會(huì)是當(dāng)年的次重點(diǎn)，可能和最熱點(diǎn)有關(guān)系，也可能沒有關(guān)系。

　　⑵寫作前身

　　英語二是從20xx年開始設(shè)置的一門考試科目，但事實(shí)上它的歷史并非如此短暫，它的前身是MBA，一提到這個(gè)很多人，尤其是學(xué)經(jīng)濟(jì)的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多練練手，就把MBA的真題找出來做，但事實(shí)上MBA的真題并不需要做，因?yàn)槭挛锏陌l(fā)展是一個(gè)逐漸成熟，逐漸發(fā)展壯大的過程，早些年的MBA的考題太過簡單，不過建議大家，可以練習(xí)下MBA試卷的寫作部分。

　�、菆D表作文考什么?

　　眾所周知，英語二的寫作就是以圖表作文的形式出現(xiàn)，那圖表作文側(cè)重于考查什么內(nèi)容呢?在英語老師看來，大綱要求上表明了主要考察考生觀察數(shù)據(jù)的能力。但在分析的時(shí)候，只抓住最有特點(diǎn)的數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分析就行，面面俱到就沒有意義了。

　�、葓D表難易度

　　我們都知道，英語二考查的圖表主要分為四類：柱狀圖、餅狀圖、線形圖和表格圖。其中，又以表格圖為最難，餅狀圖最為簡單，而柱狀圖的寫作方法和線形圖較為類似。

　�、啥温浒才�

　　英語二的大作文都是essay，所謂的“essay”，不是散文，也不是隨筆，而是短議論文。一般將其分成三段，而且遵循議論文的寫作風(fēng)格，按照提出問題、分析問題和解決問題的思路去行文就可以了。

　�、试~匯

　　很多人覺得詞匯就是在閱讀部分的啊，只有認(rèn)識(shí)單詞就能看懂閱讀，會(huì)做題了。寫作部分也需要記單詞嗎?對(duì)于這個(gè)問題，考研英語老師的.回答是肯定的。因?yàn)槿绻�你不�?huì)寫這個(gè)單詞，又何談遣詞造句呢?所以，在日常的學(xué)習(xí)備考中，將寫作中所會(huì)用到的單詞都記住并掌握，不僅是重要的，而且是必須的。

my holiday英語作文10篇（擴(kuò)展7）

——英語小作文10篇

英語小作文1

It was quite unlucky for anyone to be stolen from.. However， President Roosevelt had such three reasons to be so grateful. This story tells us how we can learn to be grateful in our life.

　　對(duì)任何人來說，家中失竊絕非幸事。但是，羅斯�？偨y(tǒng)卻能找到三個(gè)感恩的'理由。這個(gè)故事告訴我們，生活中，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)感恩。

英語小作文2

　　上周，ViVi老師讓我擔(dān)當(dāng)學(xué)校英語卡拉OK比賽的主持人。我既興奮有緊張。興奮的是能在老師、同學(xué)面前展示我的風(fēng)采，緊張的是我連中文小主持都沒做過，何況做英文主持？但我還是暗暗下決心，一定要做好英語小主持。

　　主持時(shí)間為本周二至周五的中午。在主持前一天，我在ViVi老師的幫助下完成了演講稿。

　　回家后，我反復(fù)朗讀，發(fā)現(xiàn)有幾個(gè)不能確定發(fā)音的單詞，請(qǐng)教了字典老師，在邊上注**音標(biāo)，才完整地讀了下來。

　　周二的五六年級(jí)比賽開始了，我**的步子那么小，速度那么緩慢，臉蛋紅紅的，手心不停冒汗，連話筒都濕漉漉的。我緊張極了，讀每一個(gè)單詞都是那么小心翼翼，生怕自己會(huì)讀錯(cuò)。一句句臺(tái)詞中，不是這個(gè)單詞讀錯(cuò)，就是那個(gè)單詞發(fā)音不標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，有的地方還要搭檔提醒……主持時(shí)真是狀況百出。雖然已到了秋末初冬，我的頭上還是布滿了密密的汗珠。

　　放學(xué)回家，我飛快地做完作業(yè)，又開始主持稿的練習(xí)。

　　周三，我明顯感覺輕松了許多，能較熟練地朗讀了，真是一天比一天好了！

　　時(shí)間過得飛快，像長著飛輪，轉(zhuǎn)著轉(zhuǎn)著就到周五了，是學(xué)校英語卡拉OK比賽的匯報(bào)演出。校長來了，老師來了，家長來了，同學(xué)們來了，把小禮堂擠得滿滿的`。經(jīng)過前幾天的磨練，我已能完全脫離演講稿，有時(shí)還會(huì)蹦出幾句贊美選手的話語。緊張的情緒完全消失了，取而代之的是微笑與輕松。

　　這個(gè)星期，我雖然比其他同學(xué)少了中午休息和學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間，但我覺得很值得，因?yàn)橥ㄟ^擔(dān)當(dāng)英語主持人，是我的膽子練大了許多，給我的童年時(shí)代增添了不可磨滅的快樂！

英語小作文3

　　上周，ViVi老師讓我擔(dān)當(dāng)學(xué)校英語卡拉OK比賽的主持人。我既興奮有緊張。興奮的是能在老師、同學(xué)面前展示我的風(fēng)采，緊張的是我連中文小主持都沒做過，何況做英文主持？但我還是暗暗下決心，一定要做好英語小主持。

　　主持時(shí)間為本周二至周五的中午。在主持前一天，我在ViVi老師的幫助下完成了演講稿。

　　回家后，我反復(fù)朗讀，發(fā)現(xiàn)有幾個(gè)不能確定發(fā)音的單詞，請(qǐng)教了字典老師，在邊上注**音標(biāo)，才完整地讀了下來。

　　周二的五六年級(jí)比賽開始了，我**的步子那么小，速度那么緩慢，臉蛋紅紅的，手心不停冒汗，連話筒都濕漉漉的。我緊張極了，讀每一個(gè)單詞都是那么小心翼翼，生怕自己會(huì)讀錯(cuò)。一句句臺(tái)詞中，不是這個(gè)單詞讀錯(cuò)，就是那個(gè)單詞發(fā)音不標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，有的地方還要搭檔提醒……主持時(shí)真是狀況百出。雖然已到了秋末初冬，我的頭上還是布滿了密密的汗珠。

　　放學(xué)回家，我飛快地做完作業(yè)，又開始主持稿的練習(xí)。

　　周三，我明顯感覺輕松了許多，能較熟練地朗讀了，真是一天比一天好了！

　　時(shí)間過得飛快，像長著飛輪，轉(zhuǎn)著轉(zhuǎn)著就到周五了，是學(xué)校英語卡拉OK比賽的匯報(bào)演出。校長來了，老師來了，家長來了，同學(xué)們來了，把小禮堂擠得滿滿的。經(jīng)過前幾天的磨練，我已能完全脫離演講稿，有時(shí)還會(huì)蹦出幾句贊美選手的話語。緊張的情緒完全消失了，取而代之的是微笑與輕松。

　　這個(gè)星期，我雖然比其他同學(xué)少了中午休息和學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間，但我覺得很值得，因?yàn)橥ㄟ^擔(dān)當(dāng)英語主持人，是我的膽子練大了許多，給我的童年時(shí)代增添了不可磨滅的快樂！

英語小作文4

　　My English name is sally. I‘m from China. I‘m Chinese.

　　I always wear green and white shirt and blue trousers. I have big eyes,small mouth and a small nose.

　　My favorite sports are tennis, Ping-Pong and running.

　　My favorite subject is English. I like eating apple and cake.

　　My favorites drink is coke, milk and juice.

　　This is me, we can become good friend?

英語小作文5

　　我有一個(gè)五角星形的小掛件。它是我過去的英語老師送給我的。

　　小掛件是一個(gè)橙色的五角星。五角星里面是一個(gè)白色的貝殼和一個(gè)綠色的水藻，旁邊還有一些亮晶晶的圓片裝飾著。掛件的反面刻著“知心知己枝江酒”幾個(gè)字，道出了朋友之間彼此心系相連的情感。

　　記得去年我參加“希望之星”英語選拔賽，可是我并沒有被選上，辜負(fù)了李老師對(duì)我的期望，我十分慚愧。自己是英語班長還選不上，別人不是班**都能被選上，你丟不丟人��？我就這么想著，結(jié)果哭了。李老師見我哭了，便對(duì)我說：“別哭了，沒關(guān)系的，還有下一次嘛，只要你不哭了，我就送你一個(gè)小掛件，這可是我最最最喜歡的小掛件哦！你可以把它當(dāng)作小掛件，還可以用它來激勵(lì)自己。如果我以后不帶你課了，去別的學(xué)校任教，你也好有個(gè)紀(jì)念，你說是吧！”我擦干眼淚點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，鄭重地接過小掛件。從那以后，只要我在學(xué)習(xí)中，堅(jiān)持不下去的時(shí)候，我就會(huì)拿起小掛件，仔細(xì)的看起來，仿佛看到了李老師那雙炯炯有神的大眼睛在對(duì)我說：“少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲”��！堅(jiān)持堅(jiān)持再堅(jiān)持！

　　我愛小掛件，更愛李老師送我的小掛件，它會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)激勵(lì)著我。

英語小作文6

　　從今個(gè)第一節(jié)英語課開始，老師身上多了幾分氣勢，收走了筆記與英語書，擺置一摞，決定檢查筆記，有些突然，但我倒也沒放在心上，從網(wǎng)課那時(shí)起，筆記從未真正被我當(dāng)做重要的部分，于是便又埋頭寫著英語卷子。

　　卻偶然抬頭，望英語老師眉眼間微皺，總覺得氣氛中夾雜著不少憤怒的余溫，果不其然，交**卷子，老師語氣同以往的*和明顯增加了幾分硬度，告訴我們書本上不缺一頁筆記的，只有五人。有幾分羞愧存于心中，老師顯然因?yàn)檫@件事懷著些不滿與不安，也確實(shí)，三個(gè)月網(wǎng)課下，我們所做的卻連將筆記做的完整都沒有，還不寒了一番苦心吶。老師接著將周末作業(yè)添加了補(bǔ)充筆記這一項(xiàng)，有了對(duì)于它重新并深刻的認(rèn)識(shí)，在周末認(rèn)真補(bǔ)充筆記，同等重要，務(wù)必漂亮的`完成。

　　還記得上午做的一張英語小卷，老師更表示會(huì)嚴(yán)肅對(duì)待，上下午間，像系在心上的一個(gè)結(jié)，時(shí)時(shí)刻惦記著，但又誰都不敢向老師詢問，好奇卻又小心翼翼，期待又害怕，種種復(fù)雜交錯(cuò)，倒也還是最后一節(jié)英語課，將一天的積慮排除為了一張張卷子。我眼瞧放在桌上這張87分的試卷，咋看咋不順眼，我多想揮揮手指頭，將分?jǐn)?shù)變成個(gè)一百分裝回家，雖然分?jǐn)?shù)苦澀，相比下老師的講解反而是甜的，以甜化苦，倒也不覺得英語無可挽救了。

　　老師反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)時(shí)間壓縮緊張，道不盡苦苦憂慮，我們也是時(shí)候緊繃起來，將英語認(rèn)真對(duì)待不悔當(dāng)下！

英語小作文7

　　As a small kid, I want to grow up soon, so that I can be independent. But the *s always tell me that it is a lucky thing to be a child, because I can be young and innocent. Though I don’t understand their words totally, I must keep my young heart and enjoy every moment of my life.

英語小作文8

　　從今個(gè)第一節(jié)英語課開始，老師身上多了幾分氣勢，收走了筆記與英語書，擺置一摞，決定檢查筆記，有些突然，但我倒也沒放在心上，從網(wǎng)課那時(shí)起，筆記從未真正被我當(dāng)做重要的部分，于是便又埋頭寫著英語卷子。

　　卻偶然抬頭，望英語老師眉眼間微皺，總覺得氣氛中夾雜著不少憤怒的余溫，果不其然，交**卷子，老師語氣同以往的*和明顯增加了幾分硬度，告訴我們書本上不缺一頁筆記的，只有五人。有幾分羞愧存于心中，老師顯然因?yàn)檫@件事懷著些不滿與不安，也確實(shí)，三個(gè)月網(wǎng)課下，我們所做的卻連將筆記做的完整都沒有，還不寒了一番苦心吶。老師接著將周末作業(yè)添加了補(bǔ)充筆記這一項(xiàng)，有了對(duì)于它重新并深刻的認(rèn)識(shí)，在周末認(rèn)真補(bǔ)充筆記，同等重要，務(wù)必漂亮的完成。

　　還記得上午做的一張英語小卷，老師更表示會(huì)嚴(yán)肅對(duì)待，上下午間，像系在心上的一個(gè)結(jié)，時(shí)時(shí)刻惦記著，但又誰都不敢向老師詢問，好奇卻又小心翼翼，期待又害怕，種種復(fù)雜交錯(cuò)，倒也還是最后一節(jié)英語課，將一天的積慮排除為了一張張卷子。我眼瞧放在桌上這張87分的試卷，咋看咋不順眼，我多想揮揮手指頭，將分?jǐn)?shù)變成個(gè)一百分裝回家，雖然分?jǐn)?shù)苦澀，相比下老師的講解反而是甜的，以甜化苦，倒也不覺得英語無可挽救了。

　　老師反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)時(shí)間壓縮緊張，道不盡苦苦憂慮，我們也是時(shí)候緊繃起來，將英語認(rèn)真對(duì)待不悔當(dāng)下！

英語小作文9

　　今天，我去上寫作課。

　　老師讓我們寫一個(gè)小故事。我便“刷刷”的動(dòng)起筆來，教室里都靜悄悄地，維有聽見一個(gè)同學(xué)在

　　“q-uěh-ěn”。一小時(shí)后，大家都寫完了。就請(qǐng)了一個(gè)同學(xué)上講臺(tái)念他的作文。

　　那個(gè)同學(xué)開始念了：“森林里有一q-uě可愛的小動(dòng)物，他們生活得h-ěn美m(xù)-ěi。但是有一天......”

　　我發(fā)覺剛才那個(gè)在拼拼音的人就是他。這時(shí)，老師說：“x-ièx-iè，zh-èw-èit-óngx-ué�！贝蠹叶夹α�。

　　老師接著說：“你這個(gè)‘英語’小天才，佩服佩服！”

　　這就是我認(rèn)識(shí)的小天才。

英語小作文10

　　英語課上，老師夾了厚厚的一疊紙走進(jìn)教室，說“這是我們班上次默寫的英語課文，下面我要公布一些寫得非常好的同學(xué)的分?jǐn)?shù)�！�

　　我的心一下子提到了嗓子眼，心想：爸爸一向?qū)ξ业挠⒄Z抓得很緊，如果我不屬于這個(gè)學(xué)得好的行列，那我該如何向父母交待呢？

　　老師開始念了“李怡慧，一百，韓雨婷，一百，賀小軒，一百~~~~”班里很靜，沒有一個(gè)人提出反對(duì)意見，只見那紙一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)的變薄，我的心也仿佛離地越來越高。“李潔，九十八，陳瑩，九十九，~~~~~”仍然沒有我的，我的手心里冒出了一點(diǎn)汗，“秦天楓，九十四，葛格，九十八，”班里響起了一點(diǎn)騷動(dòng)，突然幾個(gè)**喊到“一定是抄書的”！這一喊，老師也停了下來問道“是不是抄的？”

　　“我~~~~~~”葛格心虛的低下了頭，“下回直接抄兩遍！”老師氣憤地說“田鑫，九十~~~~”“抄的，絕對(duì)是抄的！”老師還沒念完，就有人搶先喊到�！笆遣皇浅�的？”

　　“是， 我可以做證，我看見他抄書了！”田鑫還沒來得及為自己狡辯，他的同桌劉小林就搶著說了**，“下回抄兩遍”老師說。

　　終于念到我了，一百分，沒有一個(gè)人說我是抄的。

　　我心里想，同學(xué)們的眼睛是雪亮的，你的努力和所取得的成績都是成正比的，所以，你不如老老實(shí)實(shí)的面對(duì)實(shí)事。

my holiday英語作文10篇（擴(kuò)展8）

——三年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語《my family》說課稿菁選

三年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語《my family》說課稿

　　作為一名老師，時(shí)常需要編寫說課稿，借助說課稿可以提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量，取得良好的教學(xué)效果。那要怎么寫好說課稿呢？下面是小編為大家收集的三年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語《my family》說課稿，歡迎大家分享。

三年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語《my family》說課稿1

　　一 、 說教材

　　我說課的內(nèi)容是小學(xué)三年級(jí)下冊(cè)第二單元第六課，本課是功能型的交際型的交際訓(xùn)練課，我借助“任務(wù)型”教學(xué)采用多樣化的教學(xué)**將聽、說、玩、演、唱溶于一體，激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語的興趣和愿望，使學(xué)生通過合作學(xué)習(xí)體驗(yàn)榮譽(yù)感和成就感從而樹立自信心，發(fā)展自主學(xué)習(xí)的能力，形成初步用英語進(jìn)行簡單日常交際的能力。

　　結(jié)合新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和大綱提出的基礎(chǔ)教育階段英語課程的總體目標(biāo)和具體要求我將本課教學(xué)目標(biāo)設(shè)計(jì)如下：

　　語言知識(shí)目標(biāo)：

　　1、 能聽說讀寫字母Hh、Ii, 會(huì)說以這兩個(gè)字母為首的單詞：hamburger， hot dog， ice-cream, ice。

　　2、通過說一說，做一做，鞏固復(fù)習(xí)學(xué)過的字母，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生體會(huì)字母在單詞中的讀音，增加學(xué)習(xí)的樂趣。

　　語言技能目標(biāo)：

　�、�、使學(xué)生能夠根據(jù)指令做動(dòng)作。

　�、凇⒏鶕�(jù)圖片和情境說出單詞和句子。

　�、�、在圖文或場景下進(jìn)行簡單的英語交流和表演。

　　情感態(tài)度目標(biāo)：

　　通過本課學(xué)習(xí)使學(xué)生有興趣聽、說英語、背歌謠，做游戲、敢干開口，樂于模仿，在鼓勵(lì)性評(píng)價(jià)中樹立信心在小組活動(dòng)中積極參與合作，從而意識(shí)到交流對(duì)于學(xué)習(xí)英語的重要意義。充分利用教材和教師的多**教學(xué)所提供的學(xué)習(xí)資源，實(shí)現(xiàn)**參與和創(chuàng)新，能主動(dòng)與他人交流，并克服交流中的困難，使交際順利進(jìn)行。

　　文化意識(shí)目標(biāo)： 增加學(xué)習(xí)的樂趣，進(jìn)一步調(diào)動(dòng)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)積極性和主動(dòng)性。

　　結(jié)合教學(xué)目標(biāo)的要求，我把本課的重難點(diǎn)設(shè)置為：

　　1、 能聽說讀寫字母Hh、Ii, 會(huì)說以這兩個(gè)字母為首的單詞：hamburger， hot dog， ice-cream, ice

　　2、對(duì)情境進(jìn)行模仿，創(chuàng)新。

　　我主要通過感知新教材——設(shè)置——靈活運(yùn)用這三個(gè)主要步驟來突破教材重難點(diǎn)的。在教學(xué)開始讓學(xué)生以舊帶新引入新知，通過對(duì)教材的了解感知新任務(wù)，并在教師用紅燈，頭飾、圖片、錄音等多種媒介的感官刺激下實(shí)現(xiàn)對(duì)知識(shí)的體驗(yàn)和實(shí)踐最后在真實(shí)的生活情境中運(yùn)用、實(shí)現(xiàn)能力的發(fā)展。

　　二、 說教法和學(xué)法：

　�。ㄒ唬┬〗M活動(dòng)學(xué)習(xí)法把全班分成6個(gè)小組事先用表示家庭成員名稱的單詞命名，課堂各項(xiàng)教學(xué)活動(dòng)勻以小組活動(dòng)為主線，結(jié)對(duì)或全班活動(dòng)為輔，學(xué)生互相交流，切磋，共同完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，在合作中感受學(xué)習(xí)英語的樂趣及交流的意義，也通過小組成員之間“**與共”的關(guān)系而形成同步學(xué)習(xí)的環(huán)境。

　　（二）情境教學(xué)法：我將教學(xué)建立在滿足學(xué)生心理需要的基礎(chǔ)上。使教學(xué)活動(dòng)帶有濃厚的情感色彩，在單詞和句型練習(xí)中使用了家人的照片，在表演中帶上飾演家人的頭飾，在加生活化的錄音為學(xué)生設(shè)置了真實(shí)而有效的場景激發(fā)了想說的愿望也有利于學(xué)生表達(dá)能力的提高。

　�。ㄈ�）鼓勵(lì)法課堂評(píng)價(jià)主要以鼓勵(lì)性評(píng)價(jià)為主分別采用了師評(píng)、組評(píng)、自評(píng)為主要方式，課上師恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眉��?lì)性評(píng)語和贈(zèng)送小禮物的`方法讓學(xué)生渴望成功的心理得到滿足，這也是激勵(lì)學(xué)生積極投身英語學(xué)習(xí)的一個(gè)最簡單而有效的方法。我把本課教學(xué)模式設(shè)置為 激趣設(shè)境——語言交流——人格發(fā)展 下面說一下教具的安排和使用依據(jù)英語教學(xué)的直觀性，趣味性、實(shí)踐性的教學(xué)原則，結(jié)合合作學(xué)習(xí)和任務(wù)型教學(xué)的新理念，我利用了電子零、照片、頭飾、幻燈、錄音、競賽板、貼畫、小禮物等**設(shè)計(jì)教學(xué)，學(xué)習(xí)則利用自制的組標(biāo)、頭飾、家庭照等**積極參與教學(xué)活動(dòng)。

　　三、說課堂程序

　　整個(gè)教學(xué)程序我采用了聽、說、玩、演、唱一系列的教學(xué)活動(dòng)，具體設(shè)計(jì)為熱身——新知——趣味操練——鞏固練習(xí)。

　　Step1 課前熱身

　　1）電子琴伴奏演唱學(xué)生一起說唱A部分的字母歌謠，邊說邊演渲染課堂氣氛

　　2) 出示組標(biāo)并請(qǐng)四個(gè)學(xué)生到講臺(tái)前，讓孩子說說都學(xué)過了哪些字母，讀一讀。找一找，今天我們?cè)撜莆漳男┳帜噶恕?/p>

　　3）檢查上節(jié)課布置的對(duì)話表演。

　　Step 2、新知導(dǎo)入

　　1. 教師出示26個(gè)字母的字母表，讓孩子說說都學(xué)過了哪些字母，讀一讀。找一找，今天我們?cè)撜莆漳男┳帜噶恕?/p>

　　2. 讓孩子先試著說出字母“Hh Ii”. 教師注意指導(dǎo)孩子兩個(gè)字母的發(fā)音。

　　教師針對(duì)學(xué)生的錯(cuò)誤，示范口形。

　　孩子模仿，小組說一說，查口形。

　　小組開火車認(rèn)讀大小寫字母Hh Ii。

　　3. 教師分別出示大小寫Hh，讓孩子想想大小寫的字母分別象什么，用語言描述或是用動(dòng)作表示。

　　Step 3.趣味操練

　　1.讀一讀，分一分

　　孩子自己讀新授的單詞，根據(jù)讀音分成兩組。找出共同的首字母。

　　2. Guessing game

　　教師將字母卡片背過來，讓孩子猜一猜。

　　孩子小組猜字母。

　　3. Let’s do

　　出示B Let’s do 動(dòng)畫，學(xué)習(xí)過程同前面。

　　Step 4.小結(jié)并布置任務(wù)

　　1）總結(jié)小組的戰(zhàn)利品數(shù)目，學(xué)生掌聲祝賀并鼓勵(lì)未獲勝小組下節(jié)課繼續(xù)努力。為激活下節(jié)課氣氛打下了基礎(chǔ)。

　　2）布置下節(jié)課任務(wù)，最高3個(gè)為優(yōu)，2個(gè)為良，1個(gè)為中。

三年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語《my family》說課稿2

　　一、說教材

　�。ㄒ唬┙滩膩碓�

　　此活動(dòng)選材來源于生活。英語學(xué)習(xí)更是離不開生活。一些簡單用語和單詞，幼兒都可以在生活中得到應(yīng)用。同樣生活中無處不在的英語也促進(jìn)了幼兒的英語學(xué)習(xí)。本次我選的課題來自《楊文英語》第六冊(cè)，第三單元，第五課《我的.家》。

　�。ǘ�）目標(biāo)定位

　　1)能正確的聽、說、讀單詞

　　2)能正確運(yùn)用對(duì)話中的日常交際用語：

　　“Where are you ?”

　　“I’m in the living room,come and find me .”

　　3)培養(yǎng)幼兒熱愛英語的良好習(xí)慣

　�。ㄈ�）教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)

　　教學(xué)重點(diǎn)：

　　能正確理解掌握對(duì)話內(nèi)容，并能朗讀一部分表演對(duì)話

　　教學(xué)難點(diǎn)：

　　A.能比較流暢的朗讀對(duì)話內(nèi)容，并能在掌握對(duì)話內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)一步表演對(duì)話。

　　B.能正確朗讀單詞“kitchen,bedroom,bathroom,living room.”

　�。ㄋ模┱n前準(zhǔn)備：

　　1、教具準(zhǔn)備：

　　A.課前準(zhǔn)備好畫有實(shí)物圖片及人物圖片

　　B.單詞卡片

　　C.錄音機(jī)及磁帶

　　2、板書準(zhǔn)備：

　　畫好對(duì)話背景圖。

　　二、說教法

　　新《綱要》指出：“教師應(yīng)成為學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)的**者、合作者、引導(dǎo)者�！被顒�(dòng)中應(yīng)力求形成合作探究式的師生互動(dòng)。

　　我采用的教法有：1、演示法；2、操作法；3、賞識(shí)激勵(lì)法；4、游戲法。從而達(dá)到科學(xué)性、藝術(shù)性、健康性、愉悅性的****。

　　三、說學(xué)法

　　以幼兒主體，創(chuàng)造條件讓幼兒參加探究活動(dòng)。不僅提高了認(rèn)識(shí)鍛煉的能力各升華了感情。本次活動(dòng)采用學(xué)法有：1、多通道參與法；2、嘗試法；3、體驗(yàn)法。

　　四、說教學(xué)程序

　　我采用了環(huán)環(huán)相扣**此活動(dòng)程序，采用了整體呈現(xiàn)——分步操練——整體操練的教學(xué)方法，即：讓幼兒先對(duì)正篇對(duì)話內(nèi)容有了全面了解再分場景進(jìn)行分塊教學(xué)，最后將對(duì)話整體進(jìn)行朗讀鞏固。這樣的方法有助于幼兒整體掌握知識(shí)和技能。本單元律動(dòng)我采用了說唱表演形式。一方面可以活躍課堂氣氛，另一方面也可以有效的化解對(duì)話的難度。

　　各位**，各位老師，我的說課結(jié)束了。謝謝!