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　　初一年級(jí)下冊英語作文優(yōu)秀范文一：

　　Growth in the study

　　Growth, is just like a boat of my life, driving on the wave,

　　Grow in learning writing. Sometimes calm, sometimes will also meet surging waves. But the boat of my growth, is not plain sailing, which also experiencing all kinds of incidents. For me, sweet and sour, salty, has everything.

　　Now, because I grew up, is becoming an adult, so, in the eyes of parents, is no longer a kid, I have become conscious, have the courage, there is knowledge. Sometimes, they east 1 "you have grown up!" West 1 "you are no longer a child!" Listen to my head ache. Now I no matter what happens, I want to recognize good "compass", first is must have a principle, cannot careless, also cannot careless, if to juggle, provokes a blizzard at any time.

　　Recall myself when I was a child, life is so easy, carefree, free, side no trouble at all. But as the years went by, in front of the waves is bigger, the surface is more twists and turns, I became a pupil, former days that I have already gone. I am tall, to go to school after a long time, homework increases, the subjects of study, I the double shoulder heavier schoolbag, heart pressure is getting worse. If I was a child, no matter I do anything wrong, no one will blame me, plus there are parents for me when the "wizard". But now, I grow up, sensible, to adapt to the independent, all things to be careful, look before you leap. This compared with the laid-back days as a child also pulled open the distance gradually.

　　When I was a child, as a child I, although the life will be more comfortable, but I was all the elders and the constraints of others, when you walk, the parents have mixed; Fell and the parents have to hold the. But I know that, after their grow up, I became an adult, is different from when I was a child. Like now of I, is growing up gradually, I have been to all the mind of your own.

　　Sunshine always after the rain, do not experience wind and rain, how can success? Driving the boat of my growth, although instability, have a calm, also have the waves surging, but it is also a variety of waves, just let me learned a lot, to exercise. The growth of the journey through me, I didn't really understand the growth has some troubles, but there is more pleasure.

　　初一年級(jí)下冊英語作文優(yōu)秀范文二：

　　Growing up I

　　Growth in the us, suantiankula, walking on the growth of waterway, head of the sun shines we walk footsteps, of course, the sky is not always clear, rainy season to speaking with you.

　　Graduation season time, for me is black, immersed in the academic life, as if through a swamp is full of thorns, but the result is not necessarily, perhaps return is picturesque scenery, perhaps return is vastness. My days as the rainy season, endless.

　　The rain has been. I sit by the window alone to taste a cup of green tea, leisure in grade nervous learning. Pale green leaves in the bath of the drizzle outside the window more pure and fresh, full breath light rain in the air, everything is so beautiful. Only teenage years, I forget time, forget the energy, ran to the distant place, blindly seek that in mind, the sea, Facing the sea, I got a change of mind and also have the courage to face life in the future. Thought so hard I will have a good return, however, think again my exam achievement is not ideal, in the mood to a trough.

　　"Well, your test paper." Little busy sending paper handed me A picture with A fork fork test paper, and A look at the score on the exam paper, I heart cold. Look at other students happily, holding his own paper discussed at the scenery the answer, I only feel groggy. The teacher on the platform knocked on the table: "everyone get the papers? The exam is good, but some of my classmates......" The teacher no longer, the temperature dropped to zero, I only sleep around me I feel the teacher sweep me like a knife sharp eyes I hasten to bow their heads. Teacher cleared his throat: "well, this paper bring back for parents to sign, that school! By the way, I wish you all a happy National Day!"

　　Walk on the way home, I am no longer interested in the stalls snacks, also no longer to I like to read in the little house. I dragged the heavy legs like lead back to the home, don't turn on the light, don't put down the bag and threw himself out of bed. I don't understand, why is it so hard still no progress. Such a thought, I decided to give up. I would like to even anger: that piece of paper I don't sign, love how how!

　　This kind of mistake in now, I think I am wrong, and wrong. Carefully think, life is always in the face of setbacks, if so give up, stick to a wrong idea, that efforts are not wasted? Looked out the window again, still under the rain, and my heart has fallen in the haze, I decided to still trying, even if there is no progress.

　　At night, I give mother signed the papers, her frowning brows stretch opened, relieved to say: "I knew you would think, a test is nothing." I looked up in amazement, see is the mother's eyes, trust I also smiled.

　　Growth is a necessary journeyed, it is not only a process, also is the final destination. Those who experienced the hardships into strips, clear texture, how also not erase mark in our heart. Grow up is a don't need to explain the transformation, the transformation must break the happiness, experience pain, after given, in my mind to become as a teenager.

　　Walk on the growth of the channel, unavoidably experience setbacks, don't worry, some of the flowers have to wait for spring. If a circuit, there are stars. If there is disappointment, have hope in bloom. The evergreen tree of hope, the life experience is long cover is new, so life sublimation. Growing up along the way, students accompanied with parents and teachers, we are not alone. Although some flowers in the spring a bit late, but each a flower, it will blossom. Grow so it is...

　　初一年級(jí)下冊英語作文優(yōu)秀范文三：

　　My idol -- Bill Gates

　　I like Bill Gates of lofty ideals, like he always confident smile.

　　On October 28, 1955, Bill Gates was born in Seattle in the United States. He spent 15 years, accumulate assets up to 110 billion dollars. His life motto is: "I am a king, I can win!"

　　Gates grew up like watching the world book encyclopedia. Gates often for hours to read this book, always felt strongly that, in these small words lies a magic world! He often in fantasy: the history of mankind will be more and more long, the encyclopedia of later so not will be more and more big, more and more heavy? If we can create a magic box only then big, portmanteau-like repository encyclopedia, it would be more convenient. This wonderful dream, then he realized - chip.

　　Gates read more and more, want to question is becoming more and more profound. One day, he said to his classmate Carl AiDeMengDe: "instead of doing a grass in the lawn, it is better to be a plant stands on the bald hill. The oak xiaocaohu because no personality, and oak swept the sky." Since this time, he insisted on keeping a diary, write down your thoughts at any time, small age thinking as an adult. He learned early life hard-won, wrote in his diary: life is a great appointment, for a people, the most important thing in life is to keep built up by human reason, proposed by the supremacy of promise, again in another diary, he writes, perhaps, a man's life is a burning fire, a man can do, is to try my best to to salvage something from the fire. That is, the pursuit of life.

　　Bill Gates' spirit will always inspire me forward!

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