中考英語(yǔ)作文高分四訣竅

　　想要讓中考英語(yǔ)作文達(dá)到完美，我們只需要運(yùn)用四個(gè)訣竅! 下面小編為大家分享的是中考英語(yǔ)作文高分四訣竅的詳細(xì)內(nèi)容，希望對(duì)你有幫助!

　　一、審題明確

　　首先必須理清寫(xiě)作順序，有一個(gè)清晰的寫(xiě)作脈絡(luò)，明白題目所涵蓋的內(nèi)容。清楚這篇文章的體裁格式，用什么時(shí)態(tài)，用第幾人稱(chēng)，可以分幾段，之間用什么過(guò)渡詞、連接詞。然后列出提綱，最后豐富自己的提綱就可以了。

　　通常一篇文章包括三個(gè)部分，開(kāi)頭部分——說(shuō)出文章的要點(diǎn)和核心，正文部分——圍繞主題展開(kāi)敘述和討論，結(jié)尾部分——對(duì)全文進(jìn)行總結(jié)和概括。

　　比如一篇作文題目叫“A trip”，很顯然這是一篇記敘文，是要寫(xiě)一次短途旅行中發(fā)生的事情，而且已經(jīng)發(fā)生過(guò)了。發(fā)生過(guò)的事情，且是自己親身經(jīng)歷的，就用第一人稱(chēng)和過(guò)去時(shí)。如果是去描述發(fā)生在他人身上的事情，就用第三人稱(chēng)和過(guò)去時(shí)。

　　范文：

　　I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.(開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題是去年發(fā)生的一次短途旅行)It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way.One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any further.Nobody knew what to do.One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area.Luckily we brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rest in it.He took some medicine.Then he drank some water.and ate some food.After a while，he felt much better and we walked on.(描述在這次短途旅行中發(fā)生了意外的事情，最后大家是怎么解決的)We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.(最后再次總結(jié)這次旅行大家都很開(kāi)心。)

　　二、用好連接詞

　　根據(jù)評(píng)分準(zhǔn)則，有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文緊湊，是第五檔(21-25分)的要求之一。將句子用合適的詞連接成段落，并將前后的表述整理通順，是作文流暢緊湊的'關(guān)鍵。

　　我們學(xué)過(guò)很多連接詞，例如：

　　表示羅列、增加：first, second, third, first, then, next, after that, what’s more, In addition, furthermore, moreover, another, also, especially, in particular

　　表示時(shí)間順序：now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days

　　表示解釋說(shuō)明：now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, more over, furthermore, in fact, actually

　　表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contary, on the other hand

　　表示并列關(guān)系：or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as, both…and, either…or, neither...nor

　　表示因果關(guān)系：because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result(of) , otherwise, so…that, such…that

　　這些連詞都可以運(yùn)用到寫(xiě)作當(dāng)中去。

　　下面我們?cè)賮?lái)看一篇范文。

　　Save Energy

　　To save energy，I’11 start from the following points.First，it’s best to catch a bus or ride a bike to school.Second，I will remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.Next，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling.Also I won’t spend too much money on expensive things. Last but not the least，I should stop the water tap running all the time.By doing all these，I hope I can do something for our society.

　　這篇作文就用了很多連接詞讓文章連貫而流暢。

　　你能一一找出來(lái)嗎?

　　三、詳略得當(dāng)，突出重點(diǎn)

　　一篇洋洋灑灑卻毫無(wú)中心的作文無(wú)論如何是拿不到高分的。一篇優(yōu)秀的英語(yǔ)作文，一定要有突出的中心思想，文章內(nèi)容的安排要有詳有略。

　　在文章的框架確定后，對(duì)內(nèi)容的選取是很關(guān)鍵的。選材要注意取舍，應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文章主題的需要出發(fā)，分清主次，安排詳略。面面俱到使情節(jié)羅列化，導(dǎo)致作文平淡而缺乏重點(diǎn)。而突出重點(diǎn)，詳寫(xiě)細(xì)述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié)，略寫(xiě)粗述那些非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)，是寫(xiě)好作文、表現(xiàn)主題的關(guān)鍵。我們可以來(lái)讀一篇滿(mǎn)分作文，以更深刻地了解怎樣突出作文的重點(diǎn)。 The Christmas Day

　　December 25th is the Christmas Day.Before Christmas, my friends suggested to have a party.But I don’t think it was creative enough.So we decided to go hiking to the country.On that day，my friends came to my house early.We all brought each other different kinds of gifts，such as books，cards，calendars，photo album，and Wanglin even sent me a stuffed pig.Soon we started our trip.We found it beautiful and funny to be out of the school.The cloud，the sunshine，the trees，flowers and the grass…all the things were interesting.They all said the Christmas was special and funny.

　　這篇記敘文，有詳有略地記敘了大家是怎樣度過(guò)圣誕節(jié)的。略寫(xiě)了大家決定去郊游，而詳細(xì)寫(xiě)了互送禮物的情節(jié)和郊游所見(jiàn)的景色。

　　四、常用點(diǎn)睛

　　正確地運(yùn)用好復(fù)雜的詞匯和句型，會(huì)使你的作文生動(dòng)形象，脫穎而出。

　　1.適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂迷~組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替單詞，避免適用重復(fù)的單詞

　　如表達(dá)“他興趣廣泛”，我們可以用：He has many interests.但是如果我們將“many”改為“a variety of”。He has a variety of interests.就顯得富有文采了。

　　為了避免使用某一個(gè)單詞，我們可以選擇它的同義詞來(lái)代替。如：I like reading while my sister likes playing football.這個(gè)句子中，用了兩個(gè)“l(fā)ike”，我們可以用“l(fā)ike”的同義詞“enjoy”代替其中一個(gè)“l(fā)ike”，句子變?yōu)椋篒 like reading while my sister enjoys playing football.這樣，句子就生動(dòng)一些了。

　　2.使用不同的句型，使句子豐富多彩起來(lái)

　　下面我們來(lái)看一篇運(yùn)用了豐富句子的范文，來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)怎樣將句子寫(xiě)好。

　　Study at School or at Home?

　　1、Thanks to the internet，we can study not only at school but also at home now.

　　2、Although many people think those who have online lessons are just copying their homework instead of leaning anything，information on the internet can be very useful if we are willing to get more knowledge.

　　3、 A teacher may be better for US to ask questions and to explain what we don’t understand.However，teachers in big classes are often not able to pay attention to every student，and some students may be afraid to communicate with the teachers.

　　4、So as for me, I prefer online learning to having classes at school.

　　句子1 ：改變了按主謂賓順序構(gòu)成的句子開(kāi)頭，將狀語(yǔ)提到句子的開(kāi)頭，非常新穎。

　　句子 2 ：靈活運(yùn)用了復(fù)雜句，包括賓語(yǔ)從句，if引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。

　　句子 3 ：賓語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用，增加了句子的連續(xù)性，達(dá)到了更好的表達(dá)效果。

　　句子 4 ：“So as for me”很好地連接了上下文，概括總結(jié)了自己的觀點(diǎn)。

　　通過(guò)上面的總結(jié)，可見(jiàn)“審題明確”“用好連接詞”“詳略得當(dāng)，突出重點(diǎn)”以及“常用點(diǎn)睛句”是英語(yǔ)作文獲得高分的訣竅。掌握好這四個(gè)訣竅，你也能寫(xiě)出高分英語(yǔ)作文!