英語(yǔ)周記格式
英語(yǔ)周記格式
英語(yǔ)周記格式
周記的基本格式是寫(xiě)明日期(包括星期,年,月,日,氣候),標(biāo)題,主題內(nèi)容,末尾寫(xiě)上署名.
日期的格式:
星期,年,月,日,天氣
eg:
July 15,2007 Sunday Sunny
上面的那個(gè)是美式表達(dá)的日期
也可以用英式表達(dá):15 July,2007 (15th July,2007)
注意:日期專業(yè)上來(lái)說(shuō)最好不要縮寫(xiě)
標(biāo)題即你想寫(xiě)的題目
主題內(nèi)容:段落
署名
具體如下:
eg:
July 15,2007 Sunday Sunny
(My Happiest Day )
Today is Friday. It is my thirteenth birthday. I got up very early in the morning and put on my new clothes happily. My parents bought me the new clothes as my birthday presents. I went to school earlier than before. I invited many of my classmates to come to my birthday party in the evening.
Evening came at last. Many of my classmate came to my home. they bought me lots of beautiful presents. they all said,"Happy birthday to you!" We sang birthday songs happily.then my parents brought out a big birthday cake, saying, "We love you for ever. Happy birthday!"
At the end of the party, we ate the birthday cake and some other delicious food. How happy I was!
It was Sunday. Our teacher Mr Zhu led us to a park nearby.Usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. But today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.
We got there at nine o’clock. Mr Zhu pided us into three groups and then we began working.
the students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. I was in Group Three. We went to the children’s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.
At about eleven we finished working. We met at the gate of the park. We all felt tired but very happy.
1、選用典型細(xì)節(jié)。
細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)在文章中不是越多越好,細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)要能抓住典型細(xì)節(jié),而應(yīng)選擇具有代表性、概括性、能反映深刻主題的事。這樣才更具有廣泛性,有利于突出文章中心,從而給人留下更為深刻的印象。比如,魯迅在《祝福》里幾次寫(xiě)到魯四老爺“皺一皺眉”,這種面部表情的細(xì)微變化,便深刻地暴露出封建紳士厭惡寡婦、維護(hù)舊禮教的反動(dòng)立場(chǎng)和丑惡靈魂。
2、細(xì)致觀察事物。
要使得描寫(xiě)生動(dòng)形象,在觀察事物過(guò)程中,我們要調(diào)動(dòng)自己的各種感官,對(duì)事物作非常細(xì)致的觀察。每個(gè)人都有不同的性格特征,所以每個(gè)人說(shuō)話、做事都會(huì)以不同的方式體現(xiàn)出自己的性格。我們要做的,就是認(rèn)真地去觀察,然后把它積累下來(lái),作為寫(xiě)作的素材。寫(xiě)人是這樣,細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)用于寫(xiě)景、狀物時(shí),則要把握住景物的特征和變化。
3、細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)要服從表現(xiàn)中心的需要,力求使細(xì)節(jié)具有深刻意義。
細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)是一種以小見(jiàn)大的方法。細(xì)節(jié)的分量雖輕,容量卻大,在我們選擇細(xì)節(jié)的時(shí)候要從細(xì)微處著手、從大處著眼、小中見(jiàn)大,讓小的細(xì)節(jié)反映人的`思想狀況、社會(huì)風(fēng)貌。
4、細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)必須典型真實(shí)。
所謂真實(shí),是指細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)能夠精確而又惟妙惟肖地反映現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的人事的特征。所謂典型,是指描寫(xiě)的細(xì)節(jié),具有廣泛的代表性,能夠通過(guò)個(gè)別的、細(xì)小的事物,反映一般與全貌,由現(xiàn)象揭示本質(zhì)。比如朱自清在《背影》中對(duì)父親爬月臺(tái)時(shí)吃力樣子和動(dòng)作的描寫(xiě),突出了父親對(duì)我無(wú)私的愛(ài),讓每個(gè)讀者感動(dòng)不已。他的成功之處在于對(duì)父親動(dòng)作的細(xì)致觀察和準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)。
5、精心錘煉詞語(yǔ)。在細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)中,我們要選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ),以期以少勝多,乃至一字傳神。
6、巧妙運(yùn)用修辭。運(yùn)用比喻、擬人、夸張等修辭格,可以增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言的生動(dòng)性,變抽象為具體,使無(wú)形變?yōu)橛行巍?/p>
7、善用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào):
魯迅的小說(shuō)《故鄉(xiāng)》塑造了一個(gè)深受剝削壓迫的淳樸農(nóng)民的典型形象——閏土。小說(shuō)在閏土的語(yǔ)言細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)中,巧妙地借用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),來(lái)表現(xiàn)閏土這二十多年來(lái)的變化。共有六句,其中卻有了9個(gè)省略號(hào),給人印象特別深的有這樣兩處:(1)見(jiàn)到“我”時(shí),“閏土態(tài)度恭敬起來(lái),分明的叫道:‘老爺!’……”(2)當(dāng)“我”問(wèn)他景況時(shí),“他只是搖頭,‘非常難,第六個(gè)孩子也會(huì)幫忙了,卻總是吃不夠……又不太平……什么地方都要錢,沒(méi)有定規(guī)……收成又不好’”。第一句寫(xiě)閏土的變化,一聲“老爺!”破壞了他們往日素樸的友誼,在他們情感交流之間,“已經(jīng)隔了一層可悲的厚障壁了”。一個(gè)省略號(hào),真實(shí)而細(xì)膩地表現(xiàn)了閏土矛盾、痛苦的心理及令人為之惋惜的悲哀的變化。第二句分明是寫(xiě)閏土性格變化的社會(huì)根源,省略號(hào)顯示了他的聲音低微,又?jǐn)鄶嗬m(xù)續(xù),有說(shuō)不出道不明的苦。而這苦正是“饑荒,苛稅,兵,匪,官,紳”把他折磨成一個(gè)“木偶人”,使他走向麻木遲鈍的深淵。這省略號(hào)里,浸透了閏土的血淚,包含了無(wú)數(shù)的人生辛酸悲涼。
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