Please note that we want to set up a music club in our school. You are good at music. Can you sing, dance, play the piano? You can play the guitar or other musical instruments.

If you can join us, you want to be a musician. If your answer is yes, please join us. Please call us.

If you want to join us, welcome to our club. We want musicians to join our club You are good at music. Can you sing, dance, play piano and guitar? If you want to join us, please join us.

Welcome to our club.

中文翻譯：

注意，請我們想在我們學(xué)校成立一個音樂俱樂部你擅長音樂你會唱歌跳舞會彈鋼琴嗎你會彈吉他或其他樂器如果你能加入我們你想成為一名音樂家如果你的回答是是的請加入我們請打來如果你想加入我們歡迎來到我們的俱樂部我們希望音樂家加入我們的俱樂部你擅長音樂你會唱歌跳舞會彈鋼琴彈吉他嗎如果你想加入我們歡迎加入我們歡迎加入我們俱樂部。

The Bronx family album) and put it on billboards for everyone to see, but how can you see it when people rush by on the interstate? She asked, _don't worry, mom. They just rush by in the morning and in the morning. Commuters are everywhere on the interstate.

No one moves. They tell her that it only costs one dollar a month, so she spends most of the money. A month later, Clyde rents a month's billboard, but Clyde doesn't show up because she has little money.

Mrs. Brown called the local news to see if anyone could help her rent the billboard for a month. She was waiting, but so far, no one had come forward.

中文翻譯：

布朗斯家族專輯）并把它放在廣告牌上，讓所有人都能看到，但是當(dāng)人們在州際公路上匆匆經(jīng)過時，怎么能看到它呢？她問哦，別擔(dān)心，媽媽，他們每天只在上午和上午之間匆匆經(jīng)過，州際公路上到處都是通勤者，沒有人搬家，他們告訴她每月只需花1美元，所以她把大部分錢都掏出來了一個月過去了，克萊德租了一個月的廣告牌，但克萊德沒有出現(xiàn)，因為她幾乎沒有存款。布朗太太打電話給當(dāng)?shù)貓蠹�，想看看是否有人能幫她把廣告牌租一個月，她正在等待，但到目前為止，還沒有人站出來。

Beyond beyond is the prince of music. He was born in the music songs on the stage. He is the lamb of God in real life.

He is the spiritual pillar of the young generation. Numerous TV programs have taken his music as the theme song. Asian singers have repeatedly covered the top of his classic songs, leading the band beyond to bring Guangdong music into the trend of the times and unfortunately fell off the stage His death is not only a great loss, but also an end to the trend of Cantonese music.

中文翻譯：

BeyondBeyond他是音樂的王子，他出生于舞臺上的音樂歌曲，他是現(xiàn)實生活中上帝的羔羊，他是年輕一代的精神支柱無數(shù)的電視節(jié)目，電影以他的音樂為主題歌，亞洲歌手也多次翻唱他的經(jīng)典歌曲巔峰，帶領(lǐng)樂隊Beyond將廣東音樂帶入時代潮流，不幸地從舞臺上摔了下來，那一首好的筆記心臟停止跳動，他的死不僅是巨大的損失之外，更是宣告引領(lǐng)時代潮流的粵語音樂的終結(jié)。

My favorite club is the music club. I can play the piano, I can play the trumpet, I can play the violin, I can play the drum, I can learn to sing. I like this club very much.

I go to the club after school every day. I like music very much. I can have a good time in the music club.

I want to be a musician one day.

中文翻譯：

我最喜歡的俱樂部是音樂俱樂部我會彈鋼琴我會吹小號我會拉小提琴我會打鼓我也會學(xué)歌唱歌我很喜歡這個俱樂部我每天放學(xué)后都去俱樂部我非常喜歡音樂我可以在音樂俱樂部度過美好的時光我想有一天成為一名音樂家。

My favorite band. I want to talk about my favorite band, Westlife boys. You know, you don't know how great they are.

I bet Westlife is one of the most famous bands in the world. Four guys come from Ireland. They have a good view and a good voice.

They sing a lot of classic songs, such as _season under the sun_, _my love_, I put my love On you, yoaised me, and when you told me you loved me, I didn't know how to describe them in one word. They were really cute. I did like them, especially Nick, who looked like a million dollars.

To my disappointment, Nicky got married. His wife was the daughter of the Irish Prime Minister. Anyway, if he didn't marry her, he would marry another beautiful girl The music and lyrics are very good.

I like to listen to their songs. When I feel lonely or the songs before bed are peaceful, they make me feel comfortable and peaceful. Of course, I also like other types of music.

I like hip hop, rap, R & B, rock, jazz and so on. It's a wonderful thing for people.

中文翻譯：

我最喜歡的樂隊我想談?wù)勎易钕矚g的樂隊西城男孩你肯定知道，你不知道他們有多了不起我打賭西城男孩是世界上最著名的樂隊之一四個家伙來自愛爾蘭他們有很好的觀賞性和很好的聲音他們唱了很多經(jīng)典的歌曲，比如《陽光下的季節(jié)》，《我的愛》，我把我的愛放在你身上，你把我養(yǎng)大，當(dāng)你告訴我你愛我的時候我不知道怎么用一個詞來形容他們，他們真的很可愛我確實喜歡他們，特別是尼克看起來像百萬美元讓我失望，尼基結(jié)婚了他的妻子是愛爾蘭的女兒不管怎樣，如果他不娶她，他會的嫁給另一個漂亮的女孩旋律和歌詞都很好我喜歡聽他們的歌當(dāng)我感到孤獨或睡前的歌曲是和平的，他們讓我感到舒適和和平當(dāng)然我也喜歡其他類型的音樂，我喜歡嘻哈，說唱，R&B，搖滾，爵士樂等等音樂對人們來說是一件美妙的事情。

Our school music club needs musicians. Our school music club needs some students. Do you like music? You can sing and dance.

You are good at musical instruments. You can play guitar, drum or violin. But later, please call me at our school music club.

中文翻譯：

我們學(xué)校音樂俱樂部需要音樂家我們學(xué)校音樂俱樂部需要一些學(xué)生你喜歡音樂嗎你會唱歌會跳舞你擅長樂器你會彈吉他，鼓或小提琴然后來我們學(xué)校音樂俱樂部請打給我。

Thank you so much for writing to me, dear Bob. Now I want to tell you something about my hometown Wenzhou. Located on the Bank of the Yangtze River, the city is a beautiful place where people live.

In the past decade, the economy has developed rapidly. New factories, houses and more schools and hospitals have been built for residents to use. But I think there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution, and traffic congestion during rush hours.

Wenzhou should develop its economy scientifically. I also think that population growth should be controlled. In this way, we will have a better hometown, your Xiaohua.

中文翻譯：

親愛的鮑勃，非常感謝你寫信給我，讓我了解你美麗的城市�，F(xiàn)在我想告訴你一些關(guān)于我家鄉(xiāng)溫州的事。這座城市坐落在長江岸邊，是一個美麗的人們居住的地方。

在過去的xx年里，經(jīng)濟發(fā)展很快。新工廠，房子和已經(jīng)建成了更多的學(xué)校和醫(yī)院可供居民使用，但我認(rèn)為還有一些問題，如水和空氣污染，以及高峰時段交通擁擠，溫州應(yīng)該科學(xué)發(fā)展經(jīng)濟，我也認(rèn)為應(yīng)該控制人口增長，這樣我們將來會有一個更好的家鄉(xiāng)，你的小華。

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The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe:

_A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the _ote, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the _ote cannot help but make money._

【滿分范文賞析】

This loan applicant claims that a jazz club in Monroe would be a profitable venture. To support this claim the applicant points out that a jazz club in Monroe would face no competition, as the nearest club is 65 miles away. He also cites various other evidences that jazz is popular among Monroe residents. Careful examination of this supporting evidence, however, reveals that it lends little credible support to the applicant's claim.

【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】

本文采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument開頭段結(jié)構(gòu)，即C—A—F的開頭結(jié)構(gòu)。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion，之后簡要提及原文為支持其結(jié)論所引用的一系列Assumption及細(xì)節(jié)，最后給出開頭段到正文段的過渡句，指出原文的Flaw，即這些Assumption無法讓原文邏輯上沒有問題。

【本段功能】

作為Argument開頭段，本段具體功能就在于發(fā)起攻擊并概括原文的結(jié)論，即在Monroe地區(qū)開辦一個爵士樂俱樂部是有利可圖的。本段接下來提到了原文中為支持之前的Conclusion所提供的證據(jù)，包括，在該地區(qū)不存在競爭對手，以及在該地區(qū)爵士樂非常流行。文章提及這些信息，為是在正文段中對這些Assumption即將進行的具體攻擊做鋪墊。

First of all, if the demand for a live jazz club in Monroe were as great as the applicant claims, it seems that Monroe should already have one or more such clubs. The fact that the closest jazz club is 65 miles away reveals a point of uncertainty, which should be reserved for further study. Since the applicant has not adequately responded to this concern, his claim that the proposed club would be profitable is untenable.

【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】

本段采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument正文段結(jié)構(gòu)，即先是提及原文的第一個邏輯錯誤，之后分析該邏輯錯誤的原因，接下來，進一步分析這樣的錯誤為什么讓原文的Conclusion不成立。

【本段功能】

作為正文第一段，本段攻擊原文所犯的第一個重要邏輯錯誤——因果類錯誤。原文當(dāng)中提到，雖然爵士樂在當(dāng)?shù)睾芰餍�，但是在Monroe當(dāng)?shù)夭�沒有爵士樂俱樂部，所以在Monroe并不存在俱樂部的競爭者。但相反，這個假設(shè)的因果關(guān)系可能被顛倒了，即正是因為爵士樂在當(dāng)?shù)匦枨罅坎桓邔?dǎo)致當(dāng)?shù)夭淮嬖诰羰繕肪銟凡�。所以，原文�?dāng)中的這個觀點不合理。

Thirdly, while several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, their residing in Monroe lend little significant support to the applicant's claim. It is entirely possible that these musicians perform elsewhere, perhaps at the club located 65 miles away. This would go a long way toward explaining why Monroe does not currently have a jazz club, and it would weaken the applicant's assertion that the C-Note would be profitable.

【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】

本段采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument正文段結(jié)構(gòu)，即先是提及原文的第三個邏輯錯誤，之后分析該邏輯錯誤的原因，接下來，進一步分析這樣的錯誤為什么讓原文的Conclusion不成立。

【本段功能】

作為正文第三段，本段攻擊原文所犯的第三個重要邏輯錯誤——因果類錯誤。原文假設(shè)因為在Monroe當(dāng)?shù)赜泻芏嗑羰繕芬魳芳�，他們的存在會促進C-Note這個爵士樂俱樂部的盈利。但實際上這些音樂家可能不會更傾向于在當(dāng)?shù)氐木銟凡垦莩觥Ｒ虼�，原文的這個關(guān)于音樂家和俱樂部盈利的因果假設(shè)是沒有說服力的。

Finally, the nationwide study showing that the average jazz fan spends $1,000 each year on jazz entertainment would lend support to the applicant's claim only if it could be determined that a portion of this budget would certainly be allocated for the use of enjoyment in a new club.

【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】

本段采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument正文段結(jié)構(gòu)，即先是提及原文的第三個邏輯錯誤，之后分析該邏輯錯誤的原因，接下來，進一步分析這樣的錯誤為什么讓原文的Conclusion不成立。

【本段功能】

作為正文第四段，本段攻擊原文所犯的第四個重要邏輯錯誤——樣本類錯誤。原文假設(shè)國家性質(zhì)的調(diào)查能夠等同于當(dāng)?shù)氐那闆r。但實際上當(dāng)?shù)氐膫�體情況可能并非如此，因此原文的這個觀點是沒有說服力的。

*Ee5aebmuzhimi's first lesson of the new semester, ATV's course on self-protection in emergency situations, aims to provide school students with knowledge of self-protection. It will help students in the event of natural disasters such as earthquakes, fires, snowstorms or floods. Many examples show that enough knowledge of self-protection and enough courage and willpower can help many people survive.

The most recent example is the earthquake in Sichuan Province in May. At that time, hundreds of students were killed by the collapsed school buildings. Even if no one was injured, all the students in a middle school could survive because they evacuated in a timely and orderly manner.

I am glad to see that this project is the most important activity for students to improve their personal safety awareness. With the development of modern science and technology, China's Ministry of education has called on schools across the country to teach students self-protection knowledge in case of emergency. Private cars are no longer a luxury for ordinary people.

More and more people drive to work instead of taking buses. The popularization of private cars has many advantages: first, it is very convenient and time-saving. You can drive to work by yourself, instead of waiting for crowded buses or worrying about being late for work.

It can also improve the traffic structure and reduce the traffic pressure. Third, the popularity of private cars helps to promote the development of the automobile industry and other related industries. I believe that in the future, the private car will become the most important car, we can not do without it ithttp://wwmuzhimicom/a//html.

中文翻譯：

*ee5aebmuzhimi新學(xué)期的第一課，aTV關(guān)于緊急情況下如何自我保護的課程，旨在向?qū)W校學(xué)生提供自我保護的知識，它將幫助學(xué)生在發(fā)生地震、火災(zāi)、暴風(fēng)雪或洪水等自然災(zāi)害時幫助學(xué)生。許多例子表明，有足夠的自我保護知識只要有足夠的勇氣和意志力，就可以幫助許多人幸存下來。最近的例子是xx月四川省的地震，當(dāng)時有數(shù)百名學(xué)生被倒塌的校舍炸死，一所中學(xué)的所有學(xué)生即使沒有一人受傷，也能幸免于難，因為他們及時、有序地疏散很高興看到這個項目是全國學(xué)生提高人身安全意識的最重要的活動。

隨著現(xiàn)代科技的發(fā)展，中國號召全國各所學(xué)校在緊急情況下向?qū)W生傳授自我保護知識，私家車對普通人來說已不再是一件奢侈的事情，越來越多的人開車去上班而不是坐公交車。普及私家車有很多優(yōu)點：第一，它非常方便，省時，你可以自己開車去上班，而不用等擁擠的公交車，也不用擔(dān)心上班遲到，它還可以改善交通結(jié)構(gòu)，減輕交通壓力。第三，私家車的普及有助于促進汽車工業(yè)和其他相關(guān)產(chǎn)業(yè)的發(fā)展。

我相信，在未來，私家車將成為最重要的汽車，我們離不開它ithttp://wwmuzhimicom/a//html。