為了避免句子冗長(zhǎng)，通常采取兩種辦法：一種是將一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句子劃分為幾個(gè)短句子，每個(gè)短句子之間有語(yǔ)氣上的停頓，讓聽話人有間歇的感覺;另外一種則是簡(jiǎn)化句子的單詞構(gòu)成，用一些簡(jiǎn)單的單詞，代替一些復(fù)雜的單詞。

　　my school life英語(yǔ)作文優(yōu)秀范文一：

　　My School Life

　　My school life is very coloful,I have many lovely classmates and teachers.My friend XX is always with me.We study and play together.We happy every day.After class my classmates always ask questions each other.And I`d love ask question to my classmates and teachers,they are very helpful.I most like my English/math/Chinese teacher,she/he is funny and kindful.She/He always simle,which makes me very comfortable.I like PE class very much.In P.E.class,we can play so many balls together.That`s my school life,my happy and wonderful school life.

　　my school life英語(yǔ)作文優(yōu)秀范文二：

　　My School Life

　　My school life is colourful. Every day,I have eight classes. I can learn Chinese, Maths, English, P.E. and so on. All the classes are interesting and my teachers are all very kind. I can learn a lot from them. During the break, I can play with my classmates. They are friendly. If I have some problems, they will help me. I really enjoy my school life.

　　my school life英語(yǔ)作文優(yōu)秀范文三：

　　My School Life

　　Hi!I‘m Zhou Jinru,a student of Class 4,Grade 7.At school ,my teachers are very friendly to me.My school life is very interesting.I like it very much.　Classes begin at 8：00a.m,I have four classes in the morning.In the afternoon,I have four classes,too.I study English 、math 、history 、art and some other subjects.English is my favorite subjet,and I often speak English with my classmates.But I don’t like math.I think it's a little difficult and boring.Do you think so?　Can you tell me something about it?

　　my school life英語(yǔ)作文優(yōu)秀范文四：

　　My School Life

　　I like my school life because i can have a bunch of joy such as learning knowledges,playing with friends,doing exercises,and more.My school life has a lot of challenges in front of me every day,so I will do more and more work to overcome them.One thing that I don't like my school life is there are a lot of homework or exams,so I have to work harder and harder to avoid the teachers' scream.But still,I like my school life!

　　my school life英語(yǔ)作文優(yōu)秀范文五：

　　My School Life

　　My name is Beth. I'm 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hui'an. My school is very big and beautiful. I'm very happy in the school.

　　I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.

　　We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes, because my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. It's very interesting and exciting. I think it's helpful for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play basketball, soccer ball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.

　　I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life is more and more meaningful and colorful. My school life is wonderful, isn't it?

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